rate_review Reviews

I love this story. :D

Yay for the smex. Hopefully it gets more emotional or... connected after this. :D

Love the story, please continue soon!

Awww *hugs U* The sex was perfectly perfect for what it was. It could hardly be a mind blowing experience when one was exhausted and neither of them was really comfortable with it. I actually think you did marvelously well. It would have been really easy to just gloss over all the realism and write a normal lemon, but you did it the hard way, the right way, and I think the story is all the better for it. LOL, and I actually thought it pretty hot despite all the necessary awkwardness. I loved the little chakra swirls. And I'm extremely happy that Naruto didn't just "fall into his arms". I'm even more impressed with Sasuke cause he actually wouldn't have minded the sex, but he kept Naruto's feelings in consideration and didn't let himself get carried away, so kudos XD. Thank you so much for the update sweetie, I personally thought it was wonderful, and the fact of "where do they go from here" is going to be even more wonderful. LOLZ I love the drama. *snicker* God, they were being spiteful at points - "Yes, Hokage-sama" and when Naruto said he wasn't one of Sasuke's alley boys O.O *Dies*. So awesome XD.

well that was certainly interesting. never thought of sex like that before

*Blinks* ... I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! LOL, XD. That's so excellent!!! I am now officially Ridiculously excited about the next chapter *chuckles Evilly* And surprising, not just because of the sex XD. I just really Really wanna see Naruto's reaction to this proposal XD. I think it's gonna be Awesome LOL XD *Glomps u* And Yeah the sex is like Icing!!! I'm really Adoring how this story is shaping up. I like your reasoning behind Kyuubi's actions and how the seals ties in and Sasuke's little moment of brilliance that could actually benefit the entire village is too cool for school!! LOOL XD (I'm such a nerd). Anyway, that the perfect ending to my week from hell! I'm actually relaxed and excited now. Thank you!! I'm going to be bouncing on the edge of my seat until the next chapter comes out!!! *Loves All over you and your awesome self* ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Well, I've said it before but this chapter is wonderful. I liked the Sasuke/Naruto interaction especially. It's on a wider scale than before and gives more insight into their rekindled relationship and the trust barriers they still have to cross. I really like what appears to come next too! Hot sex! Yeah! Keep it up!

Excellent chapter. Naruto is very pitiful when he's sick, and it's funny how Sasuke is in denial of being a good person...hehe. Very well done.

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aww sasuke really cares. and i like the part in the end about the sex. lol naruto's gonna have a fit with that one

Hmm... enjoying the story and oh so curious.

So well written and so fun to read. :D

Hmmm, i like the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. I caught the bit of frustration from Sasuke whenever they got too close to touch. I also liked the apparent fragility of Naruto in his current state of health and how Sasuke seems to be shying away from worrying about it, or trying to at any rate. It's endearing. I hope there will be more of it when they are at the inn, it's done really well so far. A little of the grammar is confusing but not too many instances of that, so it's okay. I'm intrigued about what Shisui told Sasuke and how the hunt for information and the demon is heating up. It's paced well, too, so i have no trouble keeping up with it. I'll be waiting for more from you on this, really, it's so getting good!