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ack. i hate waitin

plot thickens. lol can't wait to see what happens next

a mystry i like - hope for more

No, no Sasuke is just right. Shame on you, making him so good I want to do nothing but read more about this version of him. A great chapter, but from you, I wasn't expecting anything else. Though, is this now a hint as to future growth between Sasuke and Naruto's seemingly stagnating relationship? I do hope so. I was a little confused by Sasuke waking up and it suddenly jumping into a thought about Shisui and his memory of it. It felt like there was a gap, but maybe that's just me. I loved it anyway. I can't wait for more.

I like how your writting it. Too soft? not that i noticed. I like him! :D Yay!

Please keep writing! :D

YAY!! You updated *Glomps u* XD. Hmmmnn... No I don't think Sasuke's too soft. I like the idea that he mellowed with age. It lends credibility to the story. I think that in the end after he's gotten all his issues resolved that Sasuke will probably turn out to be a pretty cool guy (or I hope so anyways). This chapter was really good. I absolutely enjoyed Naruto pushing his luck XD. LOL, I kept seeing Sasuke in my head changing the subject to "So, why exactly am I not allowed to have sex until I've solved this case?? Cause that's beginning to annoy me." LOL, Not that he'd ever bring it up quite like that XD. *Huggles u*. I also enjoyed the two twists you snuck in here. Naruto being a suspect and then Sasuke's memory of Shisui. I really like that the idea that this is something old and recurring, it broads the possibilities into the supernatural rather than just your run of mill murder. That should be fun. And umm... I LOVE your plot device XD *snickers*, anything that brings the boys together is completely welcome *nice guy pose*. Speaking of... Was that Lee in Sakura's bed? Or someone else??

I really like this fic, it's awesome.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs

I very much am following the story, and very much love it. I'm positive there's going to be a lot more sad faces other than just myself if you quit writing. You're wonderfully descriptive, create a strong sense of characters and weave a detailed and highly intriguing plot.
Do please continue, I know I'll be looking forward to the next update.

This is a very interesting story. I am not to fond of Sasuke in this fic - he´s very arrogant but it makes it more real I guess, but I still like your story a lot.
I am looking forward to read the next part - I suspect that Itachi, Shisui... or the missing female jounin has something to do with this - you have a loyal reader in me XD

Thank you sooo much for allowing your readers to review you without a review-gun pointed at their head x___x Even so, you have nothing to apologize for because ungrateful readers suck! Maybe now you'll get the acknowledgment you deserve. If you don't get a lot of reviews, please remember that some of us still greatly appreciate your stories! *hug*

This story is even better than In the Mountains! *heart* Your writing style is really maturing.