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In regards to your last author's note, take your story down and do something else then. Life's too short. Don't waste your time if you would rather be doing something else, and don't waste our time by posting your half-assed shit on this site and then threatening to remove it just because readers aren't tripping over themselves to review your fic.

You don't know if people are reading your story? What about the hits counts? What about the ratings? What about all the reviews you received earlier? Who are these people, nobodies? Thought so... it's not about knowing whether people are reading your story, either you just want an excuse to drop your story or you're a review whore. Either way, it'll be better if you just take your story down and stop posting your fics here unless YOU really want to. Sure there will be some readers who cater to your hostage fic tactics, but a lot of us will just stop reading you.

For the record, I have NOTHING against your fic. I have no doubt that your story would continue to kick ass if you continued to write it, but I'd rather you stop posting entirely and lurk or leave AFF archives alone instead of wasting my time. There are other things I could be doing besides reading junk stories pulled right before the plot is fleshed out.

Your a egomaniac shit-head for thinking that it's only your time which matters.

waa! i'm reading! i can't have reviewed before, cause i just found your story today! but i love it! its well written and the plot seems well thought out! you've got me hooked! please don't stop!

Wow... I've been meaning to read this for ages, well since I first saw it anyway. So far I'm highly intrigued. I was pretty shocked by the fact that Sasuke and Naruto aren't friends, especially since Naruto seems to be at the root of it, but I can tell it's complicated. Personally I think it's a really cool twist on a familiar scenario, by that I mean Sasuke's return to Konoha, the rest of the plot looks damned interesting and original. I've read way to many NaruSasuNaru stories to find much originality of plot anymore, but this is definitely the first time I've seen a murder investigation in Konoha dealt like this. And the angle of the Police station and Uchiha conspiracy and involvement is awesome XD. And OMG... "No more late night walks and pretty boys for you until the case is closed. Clear?" *Face fault and blinks*. someone's a little jealous maybe?? *crosses fingers* XD. That came out of nowhere and I LOVED it!!! The tension was ripe throughout the entire briefing but that just cinched it. I'm looking forward to reading the rest XD. 2 more chapters to go before I have to wait for an update. Yay!! XD.

I'm liking this more and more as I go along. Is this your first ninjaverse fic?? It's really good! I love your Naruto. he's so casually amazing XD. The little things like him being able to hide his chakra signature and then Sasuke throwing him all out of whack. The business of the dust, and him blowing up about the seal. Which I liked your interpretation of btw. Sasuke is also really mature in this story and considerate and it's making me so happy. I'm really excited about this story now!

I enjoyed it so far! I like the attention to detail and that you don't rush the story. I'm really looking forward to more!! me

I guess now was a good time to get out of my lurking funk. What else are you trying to do with your free time??? Cause I guess we can't really stop you, sadly enough. But I enjoyed the chapter immensely. Especially the one on one time between our boys that was positively littered with sexual tension. Naruto has a funny way of courting in this story, and Sasuke is strangely oblivious. It's enough to make me grin like an idiot XD. And it looks like you're building a really good mystery. I love when authors can write 'mysteries' well. Very few can or at least very few do, so I'm looking forward to this even more because of that. On a random note I wanted to hug the little Nara kid, he's such a smart cookie XD. I hope you keep writing this *Hugs*

I am reading this, really! I am enjoying the mystery and tension in the last chapter.. the cliffhanger is a bitch, though.

so if you want to do some other things in future don't forget about this one- and 'Collision' too! ;)

I love this fic and cant wait fot the next ch. hope u update soon ^^

Ive just found this story!!! Im reading it and loving it!!!! Keep going!!!

Me again!! Just reading your past reviews and just want to say.... SasuNaruFan that was harsh!! Who says being a review whore is a bad thing....ever!! If it puts you off that much don't read and don't review!!

Anyways... my main point..don't let it get to you Cupri!! This story is awesome so far you have to keep going!!

P.S

Is it possible to bribe you with virtual chocolate chip cookies?