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you have my attention. do continue

TT-TT Nooo~~ don't end the story already~~~ *cries* please continue! Actually, could you please e-mail me when you do update? My e-mail's keitaros_kero_neko at yahoo dot com

Thanks a bunch!
Please update soon~
Miranda

did I miss reviewing last time... cause I really like the plot of this... except I really want to know what S and N's pasts together are.... hmmm darn that writer withholding thing... cause I NEVER use that.. nope.
don't stop... I might have to harm you... think nerf pats and frogs... or crickets.
Slave

ME READ! ME LOVE!

PLEASE DONT STOP!!!

I really want to see this continued, so I will review it on multiple forums!!

I really like the story and as I stated before the intrigue level on this is what draws me to it. But, I do have a problem with this because its a future fic. There is allot of time it seems between events in the anime and manga versus when this story takes place. Apparently, Naruto is the seventh Hokage and at some point Sasuke returned to Konoha. That leaves a large gap of information that the readers doesnt know which leaves us questioning the characters actions. We need background information. What are the circumstances involved in Sasuke's return? How long are we talking here? things like that. What is the source of friction between Sasuke and Naruto? Is it just his defection, did he attack Konoha, or did something occur after he returned between them?

Oh my, why hadn't I noticed this story before?

I really enjoy your writing style and your characterizations are very well-developed. I'm so interested to see how this is going to turn out. Unlike most crime-fics I've read, I've seen three chapters and I haven't firgured out what's going to happen yet. <3

Wow I'm totally reading this. It's brilliantly written and I'm on the edge of my seat regarding character interaction (I'm also wanting to, you know, find out who the killer is and all that... but I admit charcter interation wins me over the most).

Love the story! Please don't stop writing! I swear if you keep writing this I'll even pick up a pen and write something for you - anything! But... maybe that's not much of an incentive :P but I have to try my hardest anyway! So the offers there if you want :) and if you keep writing this awesome story! Cheers!

I for one like this story alot. It has a bit more plot than most, and that is very refreshing so please do continue.

Well done, as always. Waiting to read more.

Hee, hee, hee! I like it and NO I'm not being biased. You know how I feel about your work. This chapter, even though I've already seen it, is no different. Cheers to your version of Naruto and Sasuke and I can't wait to see what you do with whatever it is sealed inside that building. I also can't wait to see what happens when the dynamic between Naruto and Sasuke changes! Keep going! :)