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for The Hunting Ground

by Ljiljana

person Kimra
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay. More please. :D
person Mija
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaccckkk I am thinking I need MORE, please??? this is soo good so far and its like the FIRST chapter, there is so much in it yet not, I havent caught up to the manga so if its canon I wouldn't know some of the things that are supposed to be, all I know is I LIKE this, why is Sasuke and Naruto NOT talking?? I cant think I Naru NOT talking to Sasuke, it just seems weird, and the killer?? ooh wow, someone whos killing genins?? little kids?? poor things, and I think Hinata would make a great leader of the police department, I think she would be fair and just regardless of clan or what not, I must have more, I soo hope you write more soon, I cant wait, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Kimra
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely awesome! Brilliant use of perspective. I hope you write more, because I would love to read it. :D
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was very good. The set up was unexpected but very well done. I think is really interesting that Naruto, now as Hokage, still has not forgiven Sasuke's betrayal. I'm also fascinated to find out whats been going on with the blonde. You've created a really good set up and I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work. ^^
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. I usually like your stories so this one's no different. I hope all the tension breaks soon enough. Can't wait for update!!!!
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I like it. There were a few spots of grammatical error and whatnot but nothing too severe. The plot has me hooked already though. I love Hokage!Naruto. Good job and I'll be watching for an update.
person mrk33
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. What is the pairing?
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You already know how I feel about this story. My curiosity is still peaked and as for comfort . . . !! I have sent you an e-hug! Don't worry so much about it being Sasuke's point of view or that it's a ninja story. I think this is a good start and I'm sure it will only get better. Of course, I'd like to know how and why Sasuke appears in the village again, but I'm sure that will be cleared up in time and I'll wait for it . . . with pleasure.