schedule
October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... Holy shit... That was... completely and totally different from any and all of your other work that I have read. Damn, I think my heart stopped for a moment at the end there; and it really doesn't help that I read this alone... in the dark... with headphones on... Just, damn.
schedule
June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW
This story was intense.
I had to read it a second time because wow.
I don't know what to say.
This story had me on the edge of my seat wanting to scream at Sasuke NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
This story was intense.
I had to read it a second time because wow.
I don't know what to say.
This story had me on the edge of my seat wanting to scream at Sasuke NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
schedule
May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I can convey how amazing and how incredibly depressing that story was. I loved it anyway.
schedule
November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was frigging awesome! I loved the mystery and the suspense so cool.
schedule
October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
god i had a nightmare about this story last night
creeped me out for real.
lol just had to get that out
creeped me out for real.
lol just had to get that out
schedule
October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW
that's exactly what i said after reading this
it was so creepy but still good, very creative
are you gonna make a sequal to it because i hate sad endings for Sasuke and Naruto
hope you do
that's exactly what i said after reading this
it was so creepy but still good, very creative
are you gonna make a sequal to it because i hate sad endings for Sasuke and Naruto
hope you do
schedule
October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You had a DREAM like this? Holy shit... I'd wake up and never wanna sleep again if that happened. I've had some pretty creepy dreams myself, but... dang...
schedule
October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You stole my dream!! XD Just kidding, although there were a lot of simmilarities in your yaoi-fied nightmare and mine. Mine had unknown monsters around a youth hostel where me and a friend decided to stay over after our bycicle-trip went to hell because of rain and wrecked tires. X/
Anyways, this piece is a wicked combination of supernatural (the tv series), Silent Hill and Naruto (duh). X3
Your story was exciting and scary at the same time. I would've screamed a lot earlier if the 'smurfs' were playing on the background. lol.
When you wroter Sasuke getting up to let Itachi in, I wanted to bang on my laptop scream and yell; 'who's the dobe now!'
lurved it. Is there a chance you'll write more of these stories/ one shots? The ones that not go 'happily evah after', but make Naruto (or any other person) scream? :D
cheers,
crayonbox
Anyways, this piece is a wicked combination of supernatural (the tv series), Silent Hill and Naruto (duh). X3
Your story was exciting and scary at the same time. I would've screamed a lot earlier if the 'smurfs' were playing on the background. lol.
When you wroter Sasuke getting up to let Itachi in, I wanted to bang on my laptop scream and yell; 'who's the dobe now!'
lurved it. Is there a chance you'll write more of these stories/ one shots? The ones that not go 'happily evah after', but make Naruto (or any other person) scream? :D
cheers,
crayonbox
schedule
October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy crap my heart is pounding out of my chest!'
That was amazing. You had me on the edge of my seat. The ending was inspired...genius...I can't think how i felt about that. I was just like some of my fav horror movies the ones that leave you silently screaming no at the movies.
well anyway i just thought i would let you know how much i liked you story and that goes for your other stories too.
That was amazing. You had me on the edge of my seat. The ending was inspired...genius...I can't think how i felt about that. I was just like some of my fav horror movies the ones that leave you silently screaming no at the movies.
well anyway i just thought i would let you know how much i liked you story and that goes for your other stories too.
schedule
October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...okay so i've tried to read this story twice. Pretty much got bother by ppl the first time, and then I tried last night...and well I started to get scared and it was dark so I though it was best to read the rest in the daytime. That...that really was scary tho...what...what we're 'they' anyway? and why the Smurfs song?! The cult of little blue ppl. -shivers- it was really good and i'm so proud of naruto...hell my ass would have started screaming the second time I heard the damn music and when everyone started screaming...and when the light went out...and when something grabbed my shirt...shit...that was really scary!
...but...I liked it ^^
...but...I liked it ^^