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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! that must've been some nightmare ... geez, right out of a stephen king novel!
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't end it like that! What happens next?!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you cant end it there! you cant end it there! you cant end it there!!!!!
please what happens???!!!???
please what happens???!!!???
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Your michelerene on ff.net!!! Thank you so much for enjoying my story Don't Come After Me!!! There's no messaging system on this site so I tend to communicate with these. But yeah, I was the first to review this story on ff. net!! Just thought I'd mention that. So yeah you can go there and alert my story if you want. You don't have to of course!!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nicely creepy. it has that modern fairy tale feel to it along with the horror.
actually, i'd love to see you expand this out with more detail on the before ... it would make the ending even creepier.
actually, i'd love to see you expand this out with more detail on the before ... it would make the ending even creepier.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm..
creepy.
definately different than your usual writing subjects
not sure how much I like it, but then again
I'm not terribly partial to horror
Still ca't wait for your next story, though~!
creepy.
definately different than your usual writing subjects
not sure how much I like it, but then again
I'm not terribly partial to horror
Still ca't wait for your next story, though~!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah because I needed to really read this fic after watching an episode of ghost hunters where they captures these freaky things like a door unlocking, opening and closing on its own ON VIDEO and then this CREEPY voice saying to leave me alone and then footsteps and banging...and now this story.
I'm having nightmares tonight. I should know better, but it was by you so I had to read it since you're that awesome. I'm going to have nightmares tonight because you're a great author. ::sniff:: I hope that makese you happy. ^_~ lol
Very well written! ~ Jelp
I'm having nightmares tonight. I should know better, but it was by you so I had to read it since you're that awesome. I'm going to have nightmares tonight because you're a great author. ::sniff:: I hope that makese you happy. ^_~ lol
Very well written! ~ Jelp
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im not logged in right now but oh well.
ths deserved some reviewing.
I wuz actually planning on going to bed after this story and guess what....
I have the creeps crawling down my back now. O.o I've had dreams lyk that b4 (obviosly not the same) but u kno wierd ones with innocent music in the back ground and screaming wierd friends and shit.
aaaaah. youve scarred me for a week and i wont b able to stop thinking about it.
you stink. omg poor Sasuke... poor Naruto ....omg id cry but im too freaked out. jesus-fucking-crist man!!! O.o
ths deserved some reviewing.
I wuz actually planning on going to bed after this story and guess what....
I have the creeps crawling down my back now. O.o I've had dreams lyk that b4 (obviosly not the same) but u kno wierd ones with innocent music in the back ground and screaming wierd friends and shit.
aaaaah. youve scarred me for a week and i wont b able to stop thinking about it.
you stink. omg poor Sasuke... poor Naruto ....omg id cry but im too freaked out. jesus-fucking-crist man!!! O.o
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ that gave me chills!! Awesome thriller!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To tell you the truth that would make one hell of a good scary movie! I'm a big horror movie/story fan and that was awesome! Just fantastic! I'm sorry that you dreamed it though. But maybe that is where everyone else gets their weird ideas for scary movies, ne? The only thing I hated but sorta loved 'cause it added to the story was the ending. I mostly like happy endings but this one made me stop, reread and say, "No! What happens next? What are 'they'? It can't be over!" hahaha It was truly fantastic, keep up the good work!