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for Bitch Nights-Director's Cut

by Blackwidina

person Xcstasy
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i luv it i hope you update the rest asap!!!!
person LadyJade
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was good...who am I kidding, it was great. I enjoy your stories for their humor just as much as their smut, and this certainly didn't disappoint in that regard. Can't wait for more of either the main story or the Director's Cut.
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! I love this! I adore Bitch Nights and this is an absolute win!
person IvyLevrai
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just laughed hysterically... I love Bitch-nights to death, actually I check every other day to see if you updated. ^^;

But,I do have to tell you. The second chapter... I can see it happening exactly. I can just see Tsunade telling Sakura to do that, and then Sakura being like alright... -flash- then going back to Tsunade telling her and she was like "...I wasn't serious...." And sakura being like O_O but....

xD

Keep up the excellent work! I'm looking forward to the next installment of bitch nights!
person Queenie7
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD Awsome as always. I actually had to bite my nuckles from laughing out loud and waking my fiance'. As always I await the next chapter with gusto.
person FireDragon
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have made me the happies person on earth! ^-^ thank you thank you thank you!!!! I was so mad when you said that there wouldn't be much guy/guy action but then you brought this! 'cmon keep them comming (pun intended)I love your story and how you have put the characters. Anyway, thank you again for this one and i hope that you put several like this in the future with the story. Ja ne
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*loves* I think I'm not the only one that would like if you had more of these lil side stories when you aren't able to update the main story
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY DANCE!!!! Wow, now that was an amazingly well written foursome! Its been a while since Ive been able to get a good lemon like this. I loved it! You ROCK.
person blaquekitsune
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol-i luv it it was great! PS: 4 the other bitch nights could u give a kakashi/naruto lime scene with sasuke in the area...maybe outside. another thing don't let them make u feel threatened. ur a good writer in ur own right, so do ur own thing and if they don't like it...fuck 'em!
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh MOAAAAAAANNNN! That was fantastic! Really hit the spot *wink* XD That was so totally hot, I don't even know which part was best; I love the rimming, uke Sai, and dominatrix in the making Sakura. And naughty naughty oh yeah Kakashi. Unf! Really very sexy and more than I could have hoped for. Can't wait for more of BN, and good job exploring and expanding your creative process with the 1st person (I think that's what it is called) POV for Sasuke. How is anyone going to get better if they don't practice something? I hope people can give you more constructive criticism to help. I try, but usually I don't want to try and make suggestions because I'm certainly no authority in any writing form! Cheers!