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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, it's a shame that this scene didn't make it into the actual story it's so hot that my computer wants to melt down but alas it makes a good stand alone story. I love this story, thank you for writing and sharing it with everyone.
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was ridiculously hot, you definately have nothing to worry about on the lemon front...hmm, a re-read is calling me...
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, SO HOT!!! feed me again soon. I LOVE THIS STORY AND CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? That was just so HOT!!
Rox
Rox
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grins at Sakura's reaction*
I have to say I was absolutely delighted to see you had upped this promised side-story. And even more so when I finished reading.
Sakura is always so amusing to read about in these lemon sequences. All of them are fun to see the reactions of, but Sakura's the best, possibly because Naruto and Kakashi both know how to get her to react.
Anyway, I had a fun read, thank you!
I have to say I was absolutely delighted to see you had upped this promised side-story. And even more so when I finished reading.
Sakura is always so amusing to read about in these lemon sequences. All of them are fun to see the reactions of, but Sakura's the best, possibly because Naruto and Kakashi both know how to get her to react.
Anyway, I had a fun read, thank you!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Last one there doesn't get any intercourse!"
I'LL SAY! That was amazing and I cant wait to see more. I wonder, if Sasuke reacted so negatively to the drawings, how would he react to seeing that i wonder. Amazing writing as always, keep it up!
I'LL SAY! That was amazing and I cant wait to see more. I wonder, if Sasuke reacted so negatively to the drawings, how would he react to seeing that i wonder. Amazing writing as always, keep it up!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot-DAMN that was hot!
I must apologise for not having reviewed until this chapter - but damn was that worth waiting for! Congratulations on so many hits buy the way. They were well rewarded! Please keep the yaoi coming!!!
Jason
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I must apologise for not having reviewed until this chapter - but damn was that worth waiting for! Congratulations on so many hits buy the way. They were well rewarded! Please keep the yaoi coming!!!
Jason
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHAH OMG That was freakin' funny and uber HAWT!
NEVER doubt your lemon writing skills again!
NEVER doubt your lemon writing skills again!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol that was pretty funny!! yeah...ignore those people...not every chapter needs to be a lemon -_- it'll be so boring if there's not plot! so i have to say that you're on the right track! ^_~