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Thank you! It was a great story, great insight both to the caracter's soul and the working of Homes. Thanks again! *chu*

Form what I understand this story was supposed to be therapeutic in a sense, and I am very glad it grew into as many chapters as it did. It is a rough diamond that at times had awkward sentence structure and sylistic mishaps. I have read the story 3 times at least and, actually, wouldn't mind proofreading /editing it for you now that it is finished if you are at all interested. Also, I do belive an epilogues might be in order-whenever you feel like it, of course. There are simply plot lines that remained untied - Sakura, Sai and exactly how their togetherness manifests itself for Sasuke and Naruto.

*Raucous applause* YAY!

I adore this story ♥ please don't give up on it! You write it so well, sometimes I reread chapters.

interesting! original (especially compared to other fics on this site) i like the way you've dealt with each of their issues, too; like how Sasuke's family is set up and each of the supporting characters fit in smoothly. the POVs are also well done. good job so far and keep it up! i'm excited for the next chapter :)

I have loved every bit of this story. This chapter it was really great that Naruto and Sasuke went that final step together, it would have been even better to have the details, but luckily I have a vivid imagination. I am not really sure what is up with Kabuto, but now I am really curious, beans and a whip? No matter how long between your chapters, this story is so well done, I just fall right back where you left off. I will miss it when its over and most likely will re-read once its finished.

Zdravo! Nisam znala da si iz Srbija, lijepo znati. This chapter was wonderful (as always). Please don't throw Naruto in jail, plzplzplz. He only wants what's best for the kids :( and now that he finally got Sasuke......

That part with the beans reminded me of a part in the movie The Secrete Life of Bees where Dakota Fanning had to sit on grits for an hour and it left her knees all bloody...(girts are a type of mushy breakfast usually eaten in the southern U.S., but when they are not cooked they are corse and feel like sand)...I hope Naruto does not get in trouble so glad Kabuto got what was coming that bastard!!

Cliff hanger much? Awesome chapter- awesome story! I am officially hooked on your writing. Can't wait for more~

I remember reading this fic then my computer go a virus and the internet started fucking and so on.
I just found this fiction today, again.

I honestly don't care if Sasuke makes up with Itachi or his father, I just want to see him with Naruto. Happy and in love.
The same with Naruto. Only I really want him to catch that pervert :@

Sorry for the sucky review but I really should sleep, I've got a test tomorrow :(
Im going to re-read this from chapter 1 sometime soon so I'll remember what Sakura-incident and so on haha :(

Keep up the good work!
Please update soon!!!
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