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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i reaaaally enjoy it. what i love the most is that this story just narrows down to the communication between Naruto and Sasuke, their interaction; like everything else doesn't matter at the moment, like they are the only ones that exist and matter. It gives a feeling of something very personal, very intimate. I would be immensely glad if you decided to continue this story.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do your thing. ^_^
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hola part 3! Womderful sex, very hot. And there aren't any gaps in plot or characterization so far. For something that you aren't stressing over in plot and the like, it's shaping up to actually have one. Whether you continue or not, though I hope you do, is of course up to you. But I definitely could use some more of the last third or so of that chapter. Yes, mmhmm, definitely more . . .
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was extrememly pleased that you continued this fic. I think you could pull off one more update at least. C'mon...at least let us see Sasuke go back on his demand of no anal...that would be hilarious. Besides, he at least owes Naruto a blowjob. LOL I hope you continue this. Even if you don't try hard, because if this is not trying at all, then I would hate(love)to see what you could come up with if you were actually trying. Loved it!
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was a very good story, I hope you will continue it!
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
uhm YUMMMM. more please
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very cleverly done! This was very hot, and I appreciate how you didn't make Naruto a "whipping boy" for Sasuke. I liked this confident Naruto alot! Thanks for the great story. And thanks for leaving it at a place that could almost constitute an ending should you decide not to continue.
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
continuation? yes please!
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm....a very interesting Naruto here.... I like him, very much!!
Can't wait to read more.... Sasuke should just give in and let Naruto pound the hell outta him!!!!
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Can't wait to read more.... Sasuke should just give in and let Naruto pound the hell outta him!!!!
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cupricanka, you write the thinking person's SasuNaruSasu. I adore your work.