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by Ljiljana

schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday!! I am thrilled you updated this story. Even though I am not a fan of Naruto and Sasuke, this story is incredible. Your writing style is so good. I am trully impressed and obsessed.

schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha - just realized today that I never finished this chapter or reviewed it!
(shameful of me ...I know)

I loved that you weaved fact with fiction(your family's police story)
perfect.
after all, they say write what you know!

this story is wonderful - thanks
person astrid
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol HAPPY BIRTHDAY! and great chapter, poor sasuke is forced to come out the closet, and his dad's being an ass, like alot of fathers are in this situation. I love your fics and hope to read more soon.

Itachi has a girlfriend! O,O

(*pout* but he looks so hot with other guys!)
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

thanks for the roller coaster ride!
poor Sasuke.
I had to re-read the burn part. at first I thought his dad did it
to him, and I knew that wasn't right. he just backed into the stove.
love the turn with Itachi! leaving Sasuke dazed and confuzed that
he had to (HAD TO) run to Naruto (because only Naruto will understand!)

thank you, and many happy returns ;D
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
heh heh. A drunk Sasuke. I loved it. Sorry it rook so long to review this one. But you know what I've been doing in the meantime so I don't fdeel so bad. I really loved your drunk Sasuke. It was pretty well written, the whole scene. And I like what you added with Sasuke's father and Naruto. It added a real element of reality to it, like that's how he would act if I actually talked to him. Well, I'm off to read more of this. Sorry about the length of the reivew, but I want to read more.
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was retarded... Doesnt she know 'Tachi-kun's gay? Oh well. I guess we'll see next chappie. And Im proud of Sasu-chan for standing up for himself.

And happy Birthday!
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday!

Thank you for posting an update. Your characters are so delightfully complex. I always look forward to reading your work.
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i don't know why, but reading part eight, i had the crazy urge to cry. i'm a sucker for a suffering sasuke, i'm sure. but the fact that his father jumped to conclusions like that and that sasuke, despite that one good line about telling fugaku's fellow cops about his two gay sons, really couldn't speak up for himself made me so sad. i've never had a problem speaking my mind, and i know it's only fanfiction, but damn, i so feel for sasuke.

i'm glad you update this story more often than you think you're able to, because i really like it! lol. please keep up the wonderful work!
person reality bites
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great!!

i love the newest addition and how Sai came back to get Sasuke --and the Konan cliff hanger!
person LadyWolf
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I definitely agree with Sasuke about Itachi...what was the whole point of the past years????

I mean is he gay or bi or not???? That Son of a biscuit Sai!!! He's such a bastard!!!!

I hope everything works out and Sasuke get's his head out of his ass!!!

Post soon...this is some good stuff!

:o)