rate_review Reviews

I'm sorry it took so long to read this, especially as it was so good. I really loved how heavy and complicated it all was. It's very realistic, but in an artsy way. I do love that you are giving elements to even the side characters that also emphasize elements of the main ones. Like with Karin and Naruto, their exchanges. We learn more about Karin, but at the same time it details Naruto's resolve to protect people, even from themselves. It's very well done. And I also noticed that Naruto is beginning to get into trouble, with finding that he is more than just attracted to Sasuke, how he is beginning to wish he knew more, had more to go on. And then that is further complicated by his continuing feelings for Sakura, even though they seem to be waning. This story is real treat to read and honestly has such great flow and plot. So now I have to find time to get to the other two chapters, hopefully this week. Once again I'm sorry this review was so late.

lol i can just imagine little naruto doing something like that!

So...Naruto survived Meet the Parents.

I guess that means he can tell Fugaku he intends to court Sasuke with a clean conscience, ne?

I kill me.

Oh, and Sasuke totally ratting himself out? Priceless.

haha i can't wait to read sasuke's morning after!

this has been great, true you might need an editor, but nothing that can't be
figured out:) so glad the plot-bunnies came for a visit because this has been
a fun, well done story and you even got lovely art I happened to see!
http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/564004/
looking forward to more and Sasuke's pov too.
excellent job and thank you:)

Howdy,

I never review because I'm one of the slacker lurkers that... are slack. Wow eloquent as well. BUT your writing is absolutely awesome. Brilliant. Inspired. There's a fluid sensuality to you words that is breathtaking. Your character portrayal is stunning and flawless. How is it so flawless? I'm always stumped by this question. You write Sasuke brilliantly, don't ever doubt that, and maybe the time it takes to write him is simply because you do it WELL. Rather than the token choice of just 'hn'ing every sentence as if that depicts real character.

I know this story is meant to be stress relief for you - plotless-ness (I believe that was how you started it), I have to say that I love the plot that is there. I mean the romance and what gets in the way. Maybe some people don't consider getting over emotions and prejudices (of any kind) a plot, but I certainly do (by the way I've never actually heard that voiced, but I felt it's implication in more than one occasion).

Anyway. You are one of my favourite authors. One of the few I know the name of (though I was convinced it was Cup Cake-ia for a while hope that's not insulting). Keep up the amazing work and I hope to read more from you in the future.

Kimra

Wow... You're amazing, you know that?! I love the characterization of this, I love how obviously fucked up Sasuke is, while Naruto is... almost normal (but not more than almost). I also like that the Uchiha seniors aren't all mean and hateful and/or overly protective.. You managed to create them from Sasuke's POV as exactly that (overprotective and mean respectively) but to everyone else they're just... normal.

Also, you managed a drunk Sasuke very well XD

This was a good part of the story, mean the interlude. Interesting how people see Sasuke from the outside and knowing Naruto from the inside! You give quite a few point where i can wondering, worrying. The Neji "line", will he use this new information somehow against Sasuke? The more terrifying one: Sai. Im afraid he won't like the idea that he cant control Naruto any further. He is scary, but the plot became more and more interesting because of them. And the drunk Sasuke was great, funny, fantastic. So thank you the experience, and Im looking forward to the next chapter:)

Glad you updated - that was good stuff, as usual. It made me really curious what's up with the Uchiha family... I mean, Sasuke and Naruto have obviously different impressions about the situation... there's just not enough information yet, and I want to know! Waiting will be hell, but oh well - it'll be also worth it :)

Honey, when I saw that you updated my heart skipped a little bit. I found this fic a few days ago and just thought to myself "something this well written has to take YEAAAAARS to get updated" when I saw that you updated, right now. I read and oh my fucking God. Let me tell you why I love this.

1. Your characters aren't OC. You portray them as they are in the manga/anime and that is so rare. And hard, I've tried I know.
2. I just loooove how Sasuke is needy and falling for Naruto. Please don't make it a whole "i love you plz be mine" drama and then they become official because that is a big NO-NO.
3. That Sasuke's mother is smileing. God how I love that fact and that Sasuke's father drove Naruto home. You make them human and strikt. Spotless.
4. The part where Naruto and Sasuke are lying in their beds and watching each other until Naruto gives up and goes into the bathroom.

Don't push things but don't slow them down from now on. Keep it like you have it now. I love your fiction.

THANK YOU FOR THE WORK YOU PUT DOWN ON THIS FICTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<33<3<3<3<3<

(oh btw I totally feel for drunk Sasuke. Damn, being that attached to a person your not dating just fucking is so, soooooooooo bad(the other day ofc))