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Very nice, very nice. Thank you for posting this!

You know, from where this story began I had no idea it would go here. I love the way you tell a tale.

Unbelievable detail here. Very few mistakes. I absolutely love this Sasuke. I love the uncertainty that peaks through at times, the added drama of his brother being gay keeping him from working up the courage to explore his own sexuality more and, of course, Naruto's character was spot on throughout the whole chapter. Even the little parts of Kiba fit that character very well. But, Sasuke has to be my favorite here, especially as he's th main focus of the chapter. I love that he ended up masturbating without realizing it. It was very realistic, both in the way it was done and in the fact that, although it might be rare, a peron could drift off into a daydream or alomost sleep and wind up doing a lot of things, even some they would swear never to do again. I love also that it was Naruto's vocalizations, something that Sasuke swore up and down drove him crazy, that did it for him. Congratulations on another fine, fine chapter, a brilliant read. And, for something that you aren't working seriously on in terms of plot, I'll say it again. This is shaping up to be a very plot-like story with great situations for some unique sex scenes. Well, unique in that I've not read something so steamy that didn't have an element of something weird in it like Sasuke becoming extremely sadistic or possessive. Now, off to work on reading the latest installment. :))

You did a really great job describing the dynamics of the home. I was just glad that Sasuke had a chance to really see what Naruto lives through. He needed to know just how special Naruto is to be able to have hope regardless of his situation. I have loved this fic and I was very happy to see it updated. Thanks for all your hard work, because I know you did not mean for this to go on this long...but I so very glad it did.

Wow, I almost grew up in a place just like that. Its really interesting to see someone write about it.
I do think that it adds a nice touch to the way your building Naruto up in the story.
Your doing a great job on your story so far. I'm really looking forward to your next update

Okay, finally got to the new update. The deriliction of The Home, as it's called, was perfect. I felt for everyone there, even crazy, fucked up Karin. I liked that no matter how hard he fought it, Sasuke couldn't escape Naruto, his influence, or wanting to be close to him again. I enjoyed reading about Itachi too. He isn't all crazy or some screwed up whore trying to pull Sasuke into it or some tempermental sadist. In fact, I really like him this way. I like that Naruto is sort of the peacemaker and the voice of reason for everyone there. It's sad, sure, that he seems so mature and grown up at that age, but it works for him here, too. I can't wait to see what you'll do with it next. So much for no plot anymore. But that's a good thing, in terms opf radical mood changes and the tone and, of course, the need for comfort sex.

There will be comfort sex, yes? Pretty please?

Wow, fantastic chapter. I've been waiting for it and the length REALLY made me happy ^^

I definitely like this chapter cause it not only broke up Sakura and Naruto(YAY!), but also it gave a little glimpse into Naruto and Sasuke's life. I felt like I understood the characters just a bit more. Sasuke's jealousy is cute but I wish he'd just suck it up and get together with Naruto already!

Great chapter, please update soon! ^^

Yay! A new chapter! I'm so excited to find out what happens @__@ I really hope you continue this through. I'm on the edge of my seat! I so hope they get together, though. And happily, at that. Naruto deserves it <33

That was great I had to reread some of it to remember it all but the whole trying to ignore your feelings thing was just too tempting to ignore. I wonder if Itachi and Naruto have a sexual connection at all? I hope so, tehe that would get Sasuke really pissed off. It would make sense really, cuz Naruto denied Sasuke sex when the raven finally offered so Naruto probably chose Itachi over Sasuke. Kisses and huga, thank you much.

It was so good! I love it! I realize now, I love the Pace of the story. Its rolling slowly peacefully, its great! Ok, I like everything in it, so please, please, let your mind play with it, and write it down :D