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so what's the point of posting it here?

Ok this had nothing to do with the Narutoverse at all except names. I mean come on its not like Naruto or anyone else had a CAR. More like it was copied from some adult site names changed and put in here.. in fact... lets google... yep here you go http://www.asexstories.com/The-Wedding-1/index.html next time write something original or at least alter the story to fit the world.

This is just wrong WRONG I TELL YOU!!!

Ummm...I think you got the wrong section, this is Naru/Saku not Sasu/Saku. You'd probably get more attention there. Because this doesn't belong here.

I hope you continue this because as much as I like smut, posting in the wrong section bugs the crap out of me. In other words, are you gonna continue as Naruto/Sakura or Sasuke/Sakura? If it's the former, it's all good but if you're going for the latter please move this to it's appropriate section. Thanks.

First, use "qoutations" to denote speech. Second, put this in the Sasuke/Sakura section. It doesn't matter that Naruto and Sakura are married if the entire 'story' revolves around Sasuke and Sakura.