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yes.
I am sure the original did not have a extremely raunghy and passionate-filled ending
not that I read the original
based upon what I've heard of The Brothers Grimm, and their tales
and the tone of the first half of your story
I don't think I really want to
at least, not right now
loved it, though ^O^
you're fics are always worth reading~

~Nikki

I LOVE YOU! Have I said that before? I thinkI have.... Oh well, I absolutly adore this fic. It is the best one yet, but then again I am so very adicted to the BRother's grim and thier darker fables. I loved how you wrote this and believe it or not they were in charater excet now I wonder what those other details were? The money perhaps? Anywho, My favorite line, and the thing that probably made his so dear to me was the ending where Itachi walks up and says, "Ladies... do I have a deal for you..." LOL I could just see Sakura's hell Ino's face as hey Saw Itachi and fell over eachother to take up his offer. then the ending like, "most of them lived happily ever after" it racked me up. Oh, thank you for writting this, it made my day. seriously, I was having the day from hell and this made it all good again, so thank you. And as always two thumbs WAY WAY up.

Good read. I absolutely loved the ending, "Girls, do I have a deal for you." Go Itachi!!!

awww that was sweet.

Yay!! I love a good fairy tale and that was the best!! Although I never remembered any of them from my childhood having that much porn in them.... too bad...

Really, really good! I absolutely loved it!! XDD

That was a good story! Loved how you had Itachi seem not to care, but on the inside he was pissed. So funny. Happy that Sasuke and Naruto got together at the end:-) Loved how you put Itachi in at the end of the story, so good.

LOL...most of them lived happily ever after...hahaha...

Excellent ending. I think it's funny that Jiraiya realized who Sasuke was before Naruto did. Then again, Naruto was too busy pining. If he had listened to Sasuke hadn't been pining, I'm sure he would have realized what was going on! Then again, it wouldn't have been as funny if Sakura and Ino had figured out that that was Sasuke too early.

Good story! ~ Jelp

you, my dear, are one of my favorite fanfic authors of this genre!!!!!

Awesome! :D

Loved the story! Am totally late for work now, but loved the story! :D

Wow...excellent. Just excellent so far. I'm really looking forward to the next part. I can't help but wonder what will happen. Will Sasuke make it to the end of his seven years? Will he leave now, which will probably leave Naruto very heart broken? Will he come back, looking suave and sexy as we are used to seeing him and having Ino and Sakura get upset with themselves? Aaaah! So many things could happen...I might check out the story that you took it from, or I might not as I am sure it's different and may or may not have the same ending. So I'll wait to read it till this is finished.

Again, looking forward to the next part! ~ Jelp