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I was being nosey today and came across a post of yours in the forums. Unfortunately I wasn't able to leave a reply there, I'm not registered with the forums so I think that's why but I'm not sure since I don't use the forums on this site. Anyway the first fic sounds like my fic "Wounds"

I hope that this is what you're looking for, there will be a new chapter in May. Right now I'm on hiatus until then. Feel free to delete this review once you've snagged the link for the fic.

http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600095508

I hope this helps you out,

Cai

Hmmm, it's a bit short but I quite liked it. I did notice a bit of confusion in the beginning as to who was narrating, but it cleared up on its own later. I didn't even mind the single cliche detailing the whole 'pressing a tongue against the seam to ask for entrance thing'. It worked for this story and made it richer insead of cheapening it into cheesy romance. I liked the undercurrent of worry and almost desperation I could feel throughout the fic until the appearance of Sasuke at the end. I would have liked to see more of the dynamic between Naruto and Sasuke, where Sasuke dissapeared to and why he left, but the implications are easy to imagine on my own. I kind of like that you left it open to interpretation at the same time, is what I'm trying to say.

I'm glad I found this fic. I usually try to repay readers/reviewers of my stories that I have never heard of before, but have written their own fics, by at least going through some of their work. I sincerely hope you cnotinue writing and posting here. I'd like to see more from you.