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September 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this Gaasaku story. So glad I found this site from someone;s Tumblr post. Need more Gaasaku in my life.
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November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aw.
that was so cute.
dont forget to send me this chapter.
im almost done the other ones.
then you should think about a sequel.
one that involves the future with kids.
lol.
i cant wait.
~Golden Kitsune~
that was so cute.
dont forget to send me this chapter.
im almost done the other ones.
then you should think about a sequel.
one that involves the future with kids.
lol.
i cant wait.
~Golden Kitsune~
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November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gorgeous story!!!
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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
your bad grammar is really distracting.
ill beta for you if you want.
just e-mail me.
send me all of the chapters so u can re-post them beta'd.
i do love this story.
so update soon.
and let me beta.
i can even teach you grammar if you want.
whats your language anyway?
cant wait for more.
and wow.
a miscarriage?
Gaara seemed like he was about to faint.
lol.
and how did she not know?
she a med nin.
geeze.
~Golden Kitsune~
ill beta for you if you want.
just e-mail me.
send me all of the chapters so u can re-post them beta'd.
i do love this story.
so update soon.
and let me beta.
i can even teach you grammar if you want.
whats your language anyway?
cant wait for more.
and wow.
a miscarriage?
Gaara seemed like he was about to faint.
lol.
and how did she not know?
she a med nin.
geeze.
~Golden Kitsune~
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December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good story. But sometimes your sentences are jumbled, with words that are mixed up, or used in the wrong context.
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a brilliant story so please keep it going. This is the first time i have been so intrigued at this pairing. But you talking about how the manga was getting mary-sue-ish but I think your sakura is Too mary-sue, but i like the story nonetheless. Even though I think she is an absolute idiot when it comes to sasuke. Please update I love your story.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. i love it.. so is she going to marry gaara.. please please update soon .. later for now
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say is that chapter 12 is still messed up. i.e. it's not there. it just repeats chapter 11.
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was a good try for someone who isn't a native english speaker. Your ideas are interesting, so this is probably a pretty good fanfic in your native language but you might want to work on your english verb tenses.
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is good, but Events are happening a bit too quickly. She's been there, what, a week?