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for Coming Together

by ShikaNejiLover

person Aishu
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this story had many possibilities if it had been given a chance to be longer. Making an actual series could have been very interesting and would have provided a deeper look into this romance. The blossoming of the relationship and the threat of being forever parted would have been more profound; as the story is, I find it sweet and yet slightly saddening because of the possible repercussions of their union. I am most curious to see how it all plays out and how for the author intends to allow the storyline evolve.
person Dragon7
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!