rate_review Reviews

I know this is way late but...this story grabbed me. It's a nice surprise. I'd love to see Hinata confront Ino about her being a bitch to Tenten. (I can totally relate to a father making fun of his daughter's weight, even though my father was non an alcoholic.)
I also liked you including Kiba saying sweet words to Hinata so they make love only to have let her out in the cold, literally and figuratively. Isn't that such a truth?
Well, as I came for ShikaNeji goodness originally, I will have to check out your other story.

very lovely, yay for plot! (even if it starts out a little shaky)

Chap 1
Kiba was so sweet and charming but it seems he's a stupid jerk when he sobers up!
Chouji and Lee should have had fun last night with Sakura, hope they enjoyed it.

Chap 2
Wow, Hinata! talk about something snapping! she's gone from shy prudent introvert to out spoken, shameless extrovert! I'm sure if her father had no losing her vaginity would have such a reaction to Hinata, he's have married her off long ago!!! though it probely wouldn't have happened then!


Good story, well written, nice lemons.

very good start. beware of the newly pissy Hinata. i would like to see this continued

I LOVE this story. especially how Hinata went ooc. altohugh i love her i thinks its fun to see her act the way she did in your story. my advice, keep doing it the way you did this chapter. can't wait for more.