rate_review Reviews

Very Good.

I read both of your stories and I like them very much.

How about a side story of Neji and Ten Ten?
I think your readers also wan't to know how their first date and night was ^^.

Well, it is just a suggestion. You are the author after all.

Thanks for this fic. It was just what I needed to read.

lol, reading the AN at the ean I thoguht wef? Those wee exactly the same words as used by me in my review. The chapter though and the fight rocked, though in my opinionnaruto had to use to many gates. Remember Gai? He only opened the sith gate against Hoshigaki, and he is an Akatsuki member. Otherwise nice.

Well, obviously naruto will win the fight otherwise the story makes only limited sense. The defiance that Hinata showed was resfreshing but so unusal that it may well be seen as OOC. I`d also like to see how hiashi trains, seeing as we should never forget that should naruto want to , he couls easily fight in a tailed form. And the juuken with it´s tenketsu closure technique screams for such a thing to happen. for if Naruto´s tenketsu ar closed, he will have to use the Kyuubi and such an act could wasily get very uly. I hope you update this excellent story soon, and I am looking forward to the neyt chapter.

Well, this and the last chapter did seem kind of rushed and the lemon scene too. Anyway the yuri was excellent and I did have to laugh at the Godaime´s antics. hiashi is gonna flip and I do hope you will describe it in a funn way, for that should certainly be a highlight to come. Please update soon will you.
P.S.: so saying "arse" it kind of ruined it a bit for me. (personal, subjective opinion!!)

Wow. Impending violence!! (Alright!) hehehe

Keep up the good work!

LOL yay smut! More, please! *giggles*

Nice! I always love a good Naruto x Hinata. More please! LOL

Thank you that you are not angry at me, and it is much better than before. Of course I want to see the InoxSakura scence, hell yeah!. I also hope that we will have a bit of plot too in the story though this chapter was certainly nice. Shikamaru and Temari, those two had me smiling.Also a very nice move to put them into Suna, that gives the naruxhina romance a better chance, seeing as there is no interference from outsiders there. I hope you update soon, and i am untrigued in how you will write the lemon scences.

Kawaii! I really like it, please keep up the great work!