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schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-crys- NARU!!!! Mizuki is a jerk! And Naru sure told his where to shove it! lol. I feel for Minato though... Any parent in that type of situation would go mad. I still wonder who called in his abuse... But Thanks for another great chappie and I'll be waiting for more! ^^
person a kitsunes light
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!Poor naru!!! I hope that now that minato admited his reasons he tries to get over them so that he can help out when naru gets home after that "wonderful"(note the sarcasm) chat he had with mizuki! Or maybe it will be gaara who will be there for him? I think the best would be if BOTH helped him!!!! There's no doubt that he will need them, ne?
Well I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for writing again!!!!!
and I hope you update again SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!

person Talltree-san
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, now I feel like crying (sniffles). I'm also wondering what's going on with Sasuke, and Itachi too.
person buntroses13
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. Dont let anyone EVER discourage you from writing. The plot was good and the use of the characters was wonderful. I hope that you continue writting. I like the fact that you have a situation that is possible and relatable. Im eager to see how it progress. BTW, i really like how you keep the chapters short, you get straight to the point without stalling too long on one subject.
person Talltree-san
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's some awesome self control on Naruto's dad's part. And no wonder Itachi didn't intervene right away. Itachi must be hurting pretty badly for Naruto as well as for Sasuke. I mean having to turn in your own flesh and blood even though he knows he absolutely has to. And Naruto it must kill him to all those people going through his room even though they're just doing their job, still I know I would feel quite mortified myself.
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so sasuke is finally going to get what he deserves i am almost feel sorry for him the key word being almost any way i hope they don't think gaara did anything to naruto to and who told? great chapter i just wish they were longer......i could always hope!^____^
person a kitsunes light
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow really good! I never imagined all that about itachi!
But soo sad also! How could naru's father say that!!! He should have cared more about his son than calling the police since he already had itachi there withthem!
Also I wonder what will happen now that gaara got there...
I hope you can update soon!
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! What a twist! You are an awesome author. I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am still in shock. i really feel sorry for sasuke. i hope he doesn't rot in jail since he came to his senses. but poor naru my heart is with him. he should recover with gaara by his side.
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating so quickly.