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person UchihaxSasuke
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You made me wait again, and now I'm mad. But you did a good job by making up for it with a good chapter, so I forgive you.

Anyway.....you STILL have to make it longer!!!! All your other chapters were pretty long and then all of a sudden, BOOM! The last two chapters were so short I hardly knew what happened! And I want MOREEEEEE!!!!!!!!! T~T
I wanna know if Itachi also has a thing for Naruto and that's why Sasuke dislikes him. I wanna know what happens next so please!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!! NOWWWWW!!!!!
person Talltree-san
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love all of it XD! It's so good and yet so sad what's happening to Naruto. I also feel just a little sorry for Sasuke. I mean the first time he and Naruto met it look to me like you know he was beginning to fall in love with Naruto. Then as the years rolled by it began to escalate. And then somewhere along the way it began to spiral out of control beyond what is healthy relations. Though also I was beginning there for a minute to forget that there also stepbrothers so I don't know. But I can see Sasuke desperately wants Naruto's love but went about getting it totally all wrong. And now the damage has been done, and with Gaara in the picture now, I feel like it's only a matter of time before Sasuke really goes over the edge and maybe decides to take poor Naruto down with him.
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, when I saw that you had a new chapter up, I just had to re-read the other chapters and this story is quite good. I can't wait to read more now that you have Itachi. Thank you for a good and exciting read.
person a kitsunes light
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaay!! I wanna read moooore!!! thanks sooo much for this chpater!!!

ANd I didn't think itachi was gonna catch gaara and naru together! I hope he helps gaara stop sasuke!!!!
And I loved how you made itachi such a good guy!That's why I want him to help naru together with gaara!
I can't wait to read moooooooore!
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I've missed three chapters, how the flavors of raamen have I managed to do that?! O_O *bitch-slaps herself*
And they were great too! *sulks and rubs at her sore cheek*
Anyway...I'm glad I got to read them now at least because they were awesome! I really hate Sasuke in this fic, especially when he made his
friends rape Naruto, at that point I wanted to strangle him slowly while cutting his privates off with a rusty blunt spoon, that bastard.....
*cough* Although, when I read the latest chapter I realized that all Sasuke wants, or at least I interpretated it that way, is to be loved by
Naruto because despite everything he has done, he's inlove with Naruto too. That might explain his obsession with Naruto, since Naruto
showed him disgust and unwillingness at their first encounter, he wanted to make Naruto love him in his own deranged way. I'm not justifying
him by saying this, merely making an observation, and who knows, I might be wrong. That is for you to show us. ;P
I also like how protective Gaara has become over Naruto and I find that extremely adorable...*sigh* I also read that Itachi is going to visit, I
can't wait for that to happen since I'm a huge Itachi fan as well, hopefully he will kick his raven-haired little brother's ass for hurting his innocent
psuedo brother.
Can't wait for the next chapter, I'd like to see Itachi as well as why Sasuke suddenly changed.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
person UchihaxSasuke
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TOO SHORT!!!!!!!!!! I THINK I'M GONNA DIE!!!!!!
*Sob*
Oh well, I hope there'll be another chapter up soon. And I really love the idea of Sasuke wanting to be gentle with Naruto, so kawaii!!!!! ^^ Please don't have him beat Naruto again, have him beat Gaara instead! Lol.
No, I have nothing against Gaara, actually he's one of my favourite characters. But I can't stand the thought of Naruto being hurt again! It should just be like...a FINAL showdown between Gaara and Sasuke. And the best man wins!!!!!

Wow, that was a long message. *Giggles Nervously*
But I can't help it, because I love this story and if you make me wait THAT long again for the next chapter I swear to god I will come over there and murder you with my pudding spoon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ivy
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is such an emotional rollercoaster! The descriptions you write are fantastic ^_^ I wish some of Sasuke's point-of-view would come out on what is motivating him to hurt Naruto like that. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person 666
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Absolutely Love it. Please continue! ^^
person UchihaxSasuke
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! DON'T STOP NOW!!!!
Seriously! Naruto is finally giving in, I've been waiting for the moment when he's finally WILLING!!! Please!!! Your story is the best out of the many millions I've read, so PLEASE! You. Have. To. Update. NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE!?!?!?!?!??!?!
person Mickii
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww Don't be afraid to stand up Naru! Can't believe Sasuke's being such a bastard...he's probably very popular so why doesn't he hook up with others who are more than willing? Poor Naruto..