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for Establishing Dominance

by VFSNAKE

person Stres
schedule April 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

A nice read  but was disapointed about naruto punishment on kiba , i mean you made him an alpha and even named him that in story but he dident do shit when kiba tried frist time and second time the punishments seems realy pathetic(an alpha will kill a lil runt geting on his teritory not to say try his luck on his woman) . All in all loved the story hope i can read some other storyes from you as good as this .

person Anon
schedule January 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The poor doctor hit by tsunade
person SakuSaku
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was going to stop reading when the Sakura-chan hate started. I like her and I wasn't happy she was being bashed. Lucky for me I didn't stop because you gave us a good twist on her! For those who stopped reading this: You missed out.
person lylenidus10
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I love the way you write and enjoy practically all of your work. Call me a perv if you want to, but I really enjoy a good harem story and you did one that was great.
person angel
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic!!!! I loved the plot line and the lemon which is rare for me I either like one or the other so -gives you 49 trunks full of cookies-
person elementalmaster16
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!! SUCH AN AWESOME STORY !!!!!!
please continue making these amazing adult stories.
don't really see the M/M though (very happy about it as well (: )
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol this fic read like a doujin. A little repetitive but then again so is the motion I make when fapping it, which I did to the fic.

The women gave in a lil' easy, but that's just since I'm into hardcore rape. This was a fun read. Kudos lol
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter.
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
needed more sex
person gogo1221
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story cn wait for more chapters