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for Establishing Dominance

by VFSNAKE

person Anon
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This one is a great read. It was and hopefuly is still a joy of wounderment!!!1
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have a great story here. Be proud of the work you can make.
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is great I love it!!!!!
person AnOnYmOuS CrItIc
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of if not the best Harem fics I have Read. the pheramones were a wonderful idea as well as Hana being a naturally submissive bitch. Keep up the wonderful and erotic work.

(Review after reading Chap. 4)
person Pinkney
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the honeymoon. Keep up the great work.

Also chapter 3 is up check it out.
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I can't wait to see what gifts Kurenai brings. but I think all of Naruto's girls should make a fuss over her kid after the wedding. Nice taking of Sakura, but they should dress her up in a dog suit to make her the family bitch.
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still hoping for more. Good story.
person Anon
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why is M/M in the summary? Hopefully there won't be any yaoi in the future. >_>;
person timespal
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whhhyyyy
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good lord all I have to say is "that it is good to be Naruto"

love the new chappy and can't wait to read the next