rate_review Reviews

I love this story so far, and I have to ask: is Kurenai going to become part of the herem?

i stopped reading once you started bashing sakura, that alone makes your story not worth reading, you obviously didnt read very much into the manga if this is what you think of her.

=') Awesome, i fucking love you.

The sex scenes are very hot, the story is good, and actually makes sense (well, as much sense as any hentai fanfic can haave anyway) and although i don't really like the Sakura hate, this fic is so good that i must say Burn The Witch.
lol

Anyway, thank you for writting this. =)

I'm rather curious as to whether you'll put all your more adult stories on here and if you'll still update them on ff.net. I still love this story though. Especially the Hana and Ayame scenes (they need to get more action), and the office scene in chapter 5.

Thank you very much for the review! As you probably read in my story Naruto's Harem, Establishing Dominance was the inspiration for it. I read all the chapters in Establishing Dominance on fanfiction.net and I really hope that you add Kurenai into the harem, that would be awsome! If not that's cool too.

I was also wondering, should I post my story on fanfiction.net? I was thinking about doing that. But I don't know. Anyway thank you for reading my story. I'm glad you liked it and I can't wait for you to finish Establishing Dominance as well as C&D. I'm also dying to see the next chapter of No Mercy and Dog's Fox. Again thank you for reading and giving me inspiration.

OHHH another great chappy of hot sex. Lucky, lucky girls

This is a great story. Your choice of words and writing style are a bit odd sometimes but overall, I am really enjoying this tale. As of now he has Hinata, Anko, Ino, Tenten and Hana, in that order and within two chapters. I love the choices and the situatons are incredibly believable, though I would personally think that Anko could withstand a little more torture, even with Naruto's fox seduction. I am hoping that you plan on a little more story than what is currently present later on; don't get me wrong, I love the smut, but a story line is good too. Great job, and keep it going.

:D... that's all I can say.

Yes Hana is in the mix and I'm happy that Temari will be in it. Great so far ^_^

Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Would Temari and Kureni be in the harem?

Can't wait for the next chappy ^_^