rate_review Reviews

Oh man... this is some long shit. Sorry, but it's late and I just couldn't make it to the end. Have you ever thought of breaking it down in smaller chapters? I'm sure it would help the reading a lot.

Naruto's so bad! I'm still kinda blushing from reading this story. *Clears throat awkwardly*

It's a pretty good story...BUT, I didn't like how you made Sakura out to be the one and only that doesn't like Naruto. Even if it was over Sasuke being killed. I'm guessing you don't like her, so I won't read any further since I'm not big on Sakura-bashing or antagonism.

*Sigh* I prolly annoyed you, but I had to say somethin'. She's 1 of my fave characters after all! Gomen.

Anyhow, this wasn't intended as a flame. I still think it's a good (and hawt) story. Keep up the great work! Ja ne.

FUCK!!!!! IT WAS GREAT!... I LOVED IT.... even if sakura isnt there but no prob.... do some shadow clone sex... mmmm it was good... update soon

oh Kami! I think I died and went to Naruto fiction heaven! 3 Lemons in one chapter even Ero-sennin and Kakashi will be sporting nose bleeds

very good! a few odd turns of phrase but good. please post again soon.

please post again soon!