rate_review Reviews

So, it's Kiba ooooh. His boyfriend is Shino that's so cool. Now Kiba knows how to handle Shino and their relationship, thanks to Shino's friend Naruto. I like how you did that. Sasuke is thinking that Kiba's into Naruto(only because Kiba blew up at him). I can't wait for Sasuke to get to the shop and have Naruto alone.

*squeal*
so cute, Ino rocks on all levels hehe!
I'm excited to see what happens when Sasuke goes to the
shop the next day! Naruto's gonna be pissed.
Awww Gaara and cookies! >////< super kawaii!!

haha, funny -
iruka is naruto's mom (am i right?)
poor naruto - he's really oblivious - when the author writes something it's the truth (naruto is a gay)
update soon

OMG!! Where to start!? At first when Gaara talked about spending more time with Naruto you know I thought- Instant romance- until Naruto mentioned to Gaara how Neji was. Now I'm wondering who Iruka is talking about for Naruto to show around tomorrow. Is this the intro to another character like maybe Shino. Then Sasuke can fight over Naruto with Shino. Now, Ino's plan is definitely a nice one considering the person she's using is a very willing Sasuke. This has gotten really good really fast. Can't wait to see the next chapter.:)

Nice. I love sweets and it will be interesting to see what pastries will be mentioned in this and how someone from the Mafia (Sasuke) will figure into it.

Sasuke's right, this should be fun. I can't wait for more. I'm glad to see you have another story in the works.

I'm going to assume that whatever word processing program you're using doesn't have a spell/grammar-check. I don't know if you've already got a beta or what, but if you want me to, I can do a quick run-through of your chapters to fix whatever mistakes I may come across.