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by Shaylilin

schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im so happy to be getting back on track with this story.:D Im so excited for the announcement of the baby and how his fans will react to it. I still remember how i loved how protective Sasuke is over Naruto especially in his current state. I hope Obito and the guys can get to Zetsu.:( LOL Zetsu2 being called Barbie was so damn funny.XDD
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
T___________T OMG i hope they find Deidara and that he's alright. I know that Kakuzu and Hidan can be pretty ruthless but i hope they havent found him. x.x Im glad to see Sasuke letting go of his emotions for his and Naruto's sake. Yaaay they're approved for being legally united. X3
I love how u explained how the pregnancy is able to happen. I just loved that whole scene of Grammy night. Kiba's big head added to that.LOL
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Deidara got them Yaaay!!! Im so glad he gets his revenge for them making him cut off his hair wow and dying it black and red. o.o i know that looks pretty sexy actually lol. Now it seems the real trouble maker is still out there and knows how to push all the wrong buttons to continue this fiasco and to try and kill his "other half." Such excitement!!XD Then for Deidara to have found Kakuzu and Hidan in that position was icing on the cake lol
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww such a sweet and tender moment for them. Im so glad Naruto got to know the good news of Deidara and Zetsu. No wonder he was able to have such mind-blowing sex and especially after eating those ribs and the float.*sounds so delicious* I forgot Zetsu and his brother were teens so wow 'Barbie' really made a drastic change in appearance. He will definitely be undetected and who'dve thought Hanabi would be so against Hinata that she'd wanna team up with someone so brutal. o.o
Yaaay Neji is in this!!! Gorgeous!!!
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Temari feels Zetsu? Whats the connection well i guess ill get that later.:) Wow Neji doesnt know that he and Hinata r cousins, nice plot twist.:D I love how u have so many characters incorporated in the story:D I got quite a scare when Naruto passed out. I thought for sure it was something serious. Thank goodness it isnt. Whew!! Tama and Hanabi working together is totally scary cuz she seems to have connections too. o.o
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
how positively freaky to know that someone is coming in and out of ur house so freely as to vandalize it and leave without a word. Poor Sasuke reverting back to earlier trauma just what the little tormentor wants. Damn >.< Tama is real good at tormenting i see i cant wait to see what more he'll do to them or what Hanabi thinks up next for her sister maybe.
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL i loved the banter between Dei and Tachi in the bed.X3 Tama is was cocky wasnt he cuz i thought he wouldnt show up figuring they would trap him. I hope and pray he doesnt bribe someone on the trip to Boston. Hanabi i cant wait to find out her deal with Hinata and what of Neji? She was content to say that Hinata didnt do things with him. Im so happy about the names they came up with for their baby. Yes this ordeal seems to be winding down i sure hope so. Wow and ill always read ur stories theyre terrific and adventurous and sad and happy i love them so yes im still with u too now that ive caught up. :D Im so glad ur muse for ur originals is going strong, and life for u and ur family is kinda back to normal.:D
Love ya!!X3
person qwerty
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I'm glad that they finally caught Tama. I hope that he doesn't successfully bribe anyone on the transportation team. I really want Tama to get what's coming to him.
Keep going!
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK, I can finally review now. Great chapter, I loved what Naruto wanted for breakfast. I actually wanted some too. LOL. All of it, together like him. LOL. Stupid depo, and stupid hormones. LOL. I am glad that Naruto's blood sugar has leveled out, and that he's less sleepy now. I was so sad when whatshisface messed up the pic, keyed the car and trashed their place. It took me a hot second to realize who he was, dense as I am. I loved how Naruto was able to keep calm until they got to Itachi's. My heart broke for the two of them. I really hope he doesn't kidnap Naruto. Cause I would have to bust some heads yo. Word. What's the dilly? Ye-yah!! What?! LOL. Sorry, don't know where that came from. Love you miss you, can't wait to read more.

XXOO
Ero
person qwerty
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.