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for Any Time the Fly Goes Global

by Shaylilin

person fayjay18
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story. one question,why couldn't sasuke be the one who got pregnant.
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, this one was WAF. LOL. I loved Baki's baby talk. And poor Nar, he's got gestational diabetes, and passed out, and no more crazy food? Awww, poor thing. He lives for eating, and eating weird junk, well, most of the time anyways. ^.^ And yay!! I'm glad Deidei is back, for at least a little while anyways. I wonder what Sasuke is going to do with Minato that Naruto can't be around for? Oh, BTW, loved Temari's joke to lighten the mood. LOL. Oh yeah, loved the fact that Sas, and Nar never considered the possibility of having a girl. That's very funny to me. I guess they really didn't pay any attention in biology. My poor grandma was blamed for having a million boys. ^.^ Oh man, I almost forgot about the plot against the Hyuugas. I think I spelled that wrong. Dang it all!! Well, I'm sure Itachi will be on top of things concerning Hinata. He won't allow another loved one to be taken from him. Kick ass chapter. I just know your muse is getting itchy to give us some conflict. ^.^
XXOO
person TheSimi
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I love that Minato and Naruto are growing closer and I liked that Deidara is back. Tama is freaking me out, I really hope that he won't get his hands on Naruto...

Thank yoou so much for this and I can't wait to read more!
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I saw this pop up a day or so ago and I said to myself, "Jade Rose? I think I heard of her before." So I just had to read Any Time the Fly before I read this story and I must say that isnt amazing. I think Im in love and the Mpeg was perfect. I do read some Mpegs but I find them stupidly funny, but this wasnt so. You came up with great reasoning and the love and care these two share is just beautiful. I cant wait to see more. But until next time; See ya's!!!
person qwerty
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw. I'm glad that things are looking up for our favorite couple. Great story by the way. I read the 1st one and was immediately hooked so I had to read this sequel.
keep going!
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Update!!! Woohoo!! So, bad zetsu escaped, good zetsu is safe, and dammit, I want ribs and a rootbeer float. You suck. LOL. Mmmm, chili's ribs. Mmmmm....*drools* well, anywho, good chapter. As always I can't wait to read the next one. I hope nothing is wrong with naruto, but being pregnant is really tiring enough, especially being pregnant and your body isn't made to carry a baby. XXOO
person TheSimi
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always! I hope that the gang will find a way to stop Tama before he'll get his hands on Zetsu again and before he'll do anything to Sasu, Naru or the baby...

Thank you so much for this chapter and I can't wait to read more! Happy Holidays to you!
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaaw, poor Dei! xD It must be hard for him, loosing his beautiful blonde hair XD Good thing that they saved Zetsu! even if his bad half is still out there. :)

person TheSimi
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello again and thank you for this new chapter!

Ooh Obito and Kisame needs to be punished for worrying everyone like that, I was so scared that something had happened to them. Also I’m extremely relieved that they have gotten Deidara back.

I almost and I mean almost felt sorry for Hidan and Kakuzu for getting caught while being frisky…so degrading and humiliating…ha ha ha okay so I’m not sorry at all they deserve everything they get. I hope Zetsu will be okay, I wonder what the evil version of him will be up to now, he doesn’t strike me as the forgive and forget type.

Is Naruto okay? I hope that there’s nothing wrong with him or the baby.

Thank you so much for this chapter and as usual I can’t wait to read more!
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Deidei and his damn hair. That was funny, and I love the way he was torturing Hidan and Kakuzu.....At least they have good Zetsu safe..but then bad Zetsu is on the loose. Uh oh. And why is Naruto sleeping so much? Is it b/c the "condition" is putting extra strain on him? Poor buddy. Well, I loved it as always, and I can't wait to read more.

And yes, donuts and mashed potatos, together, but speparate, makes sense...I wanted fried chicken and chocolate cake..LOL. Remember how, nail biting the first trimester is...you don't really feel pregnant yet...and you're on pins an needles waiting for the visit when you get to hear the baby's heartbeat?