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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As usual this was very, very good! Poor moody little Sasuke! Thank goodness he has Naruto because I think any other perso would have a gard time dealing with him.
What is Zetsu planning and what organization does he want to get free from? You're making me so curious.
I think that Sasuke and Naruto would make very pretty babies...
Thank you so much for this chapter and I can't wait to read more!
What is Zetsu planning and what organization does he want to get free from? You're making me so curious.
I think that Sasuke and Naruto would make very pretty babies...
Thank you so much for this chapter and I can't wait to read more!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again with an amazing chapter! As I have said before I love the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto in this one. They are so loving towards each other and even though they argue and have bad days it's clear that they can't live without one and other.
I agree with Sasuke that Naruto is too trusting. Let's face it, Zetsu is plain creepy and I would have found it more than a little weird that a stranger knows more about your boyfriends shoe size and such than you do... I wonder what Zetsu's two personalities has planned. By the way, how did Zetsu get passes Anko to take pictures of his privates with Sasuke's camera? She doesn't seem the type to slack off on the job.
I'm glad that you have found your muse and know where you're going with this story and I can't wait to read more, thank you so much for this chapter!
I agree with Sasuke that Naruto is too trusting. Let's face it, Zetsu is plain creepy and I would have found it more than a little weird that a stranger knows more about your boyfriends shoe size and such than you do... I wonder what Zetsu's two personalities has planned. By the way, how did Zetsu get passes Anko to take pictures of his privates with Sasuke's camera? She doesn't seem the type to slack off on the job.
I'm glad that you have found your muse and know where you're going with this story and I can't wait to read more, thank you so much for this chapter!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, Naruto's so slow. Even if I really believed Zetsu about reading ALL the interviews of Naruto's and Sasuke's, a red light would still come up you'd think saying it's awfully strange Zetsu was at the right place at the right time to help Naruto. Man, Zetsu is one creepy dude. So he's the one who took the pictures of his own genitalia for Naruto, not Sasuke as I was thinking. oh and I like that you answer the reviews at the beginning, as I may've said before, it's good to know that Authors actually listen to what you say. By the way, I'm glad you THOUGHT about MPREG. Would it be painfully obvious that Sasuke would be carrying the baby? or Naruto? Just wondering.:D
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Sasuke and a baby is just simply adorable. I wish this was an MPREG. I'm starting to really get into this sequel.
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again an amazing chapter! I had my suspicions that Mr. Split Personality was Zetsu and now I'm happy that I was right. He was kind of creepy though...I kept picturing Gollum and Smeagol in my head. I don't think we have seen the last of him though.
I find it refreshing that Naruto and Sasuke can still get annoyed with each other, that shows that they are human. No matter how much you love and care for another person you're bound to get pissed at them sometimes. If not something is seriously wrong. I think that it can make a realionship stronger.
The Obito and Kisame interlude was very, very sweet! It's so adorable how in love they are after ten years together.
Thank you so very much for this chapter and as usual I can't wait to read more!
I find it refreshing that Naruto and Sasuke can still get annoyed with each other, that shows that they are human. No matter how much you love and care for another person you're bound to get pissed at them sometimes. If not something is seriously wrong. I think that it can make a realionship stronger.
The Obito and Kisame interlude was very, very sweet! It's so adorable how in love they are after ten years together.
Thank you so very much for this chapter and as usual I can't wait to read more!
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, dirty bathroom sex!!! LOL. Poor Sasuke. I can't even begin to imagine how somebody would cope with what happened to him. I would think it would involve lots of xanax. But I guess Naruto helps with that, and all that hot, rampant, dirty sex doesn't hurt either. ^.^ It's so sweet that Hinata and Itachi named the baby, Baki. And seeing a baby crazy Sasuke is adorable too!! I can practically hear omninous music. What's going to happen to poor Sasuke? Is the split personality Zetsu? Hmmm. *thinks* Anyway, I can't wait to read more. Good luck with your photography!! XXOO
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad.
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely amazing and you get better with every chapter! I wonder who the split personality guy is and why he wnats to meet Naruto...Oh and I just LOVE the way you write Sasuke and Naruto together, they are so sweet!
Thank you so much for this chapter and I can't wait to read more!
Thank you so much for this chapter and I can't wait to read more!
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mwhaha, killer itachi! i love it! i'm SO glad you decided to do a sequel! I LOVED the first one! They're in Japan now, w00t! go Sasuke being the only one who know's what's going on! heh!
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the first story so I'm glad that you have made a sequel. This first chapter was great and I can't wait to read more. I hope that our boys will be spared from things as bad as they got in the last story...
Thank you for this chapter and I look forward to the next one!
Thank you for this chapter and I look forward to the next one!