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for Love Letters from the Hokage

by KotoneHime

person a kitsunes light
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WooW that was quite the letter! It was quite contradictory, becuase in a since he is getting worse, because:who in their right minds would put that they want to rape you in a love letter?!?!; But at the same time the last paragraph was really sweet or/and romantic!
Sooo I can't wait to see what happens!!!
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO as hard as sai! This was hilarious!
Although I cant really see Itachi crushing on Naruto, still Excellent job!
Couldn't stop laughing!
5 *'s
*****Plz hurry up and write more!!!!!!!
person Leeana69
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Itachi's kinda creepy in his wanting Naruto.

I think writing down that you want to 'rape someone over and over' is going the wrong way to getting them into bed. LOL
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, please, I beg of you, continue with this fic! It's one of the best ItaNaru-fics I've ever read because it's so hilarious. And it's also, strangely enough very realistic. I totally love it and I'd be so happy if you would write more chapters.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
person move_them_hands
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The letter was so great ;-; but the story didn't really seem to go with the letter, would have been nice if this wasn't a crack fic and it was made seriously...but parts of it made me chuckle X3

Itachi is so adorable, hahah. I look forward to an update.
person Becky
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!! This story is so CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!
person mrk33
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have to give us more.........