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July 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
i don't know whether you still write on this or not bit please continue the waiting time is killing me
(sorry if my english is bad)
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December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and cant wait for the next chapter.
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October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i DISLIKE T HIS SAKURA SHOULD NOT SCREW SASUKE.. SHE HAS HER MASTER.
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October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
never HAVE sasuke and sakura together, it makes no sense, sasuke is QUEER he is a FAG get it?
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September 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WHY DOESN'T THIS SITE HAVE UPDATE NOTIFICATIONS?!!? WHY!?
Now that's that's out of the way, fantastic story, seriously, around halfway through I stopped caring about the smut and was just in it for the story itself. /Extremely/ well done, I really like the many different influences that have made their way into this fic, Gibbs' Rules, Avatar's Fire Nation, a shit-ton from Bleach, I'm half expecting someone with absolutely no Chakra to show up having just developed his Killing Intent to the point of Haki by now.
Brilliant work, I can't wait for more.
P.S
Naruto's 'Wings', no pic on your profile.
Now that's that's out of the way, fantastic story, seriously, around halfway through I stopped caring about the smut and was just in it for the story itself. /Extremely/ well done, I really like the many different influences that have made their way into this fic, Gibbs' Rules, Avatar's Fire Nation, a shit-ton from Bleach, I'm half expecting someone with absolutely no Chakra to show up having just developed his Killing Intent to the point of Haki by now.
Brilliant work, I can't wait for more.
P.S
Naruto's 'Wings', no pic on your profile.
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January 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I hope you continue it, thank you for your time and effort!
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May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I must say that you are now my favorite author. This story is amazing, you make it so that the storyline differs quite a bit from the cannon, essentially creating a whole new story unlike what I am used to seeing which are just variations of the same story. Also unlike many of the stories I have seen on here, this story isn't about the sex but actually has meaning ang a plot line. I do hope you continue this and I wish you the best of luck.
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May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic, great expanding of characters...and good use ideas from other animations to create an actual world within the shinobi one. Just as good as your work on fanfiction itself.
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February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit i liked the riddick analogy in the middle there. It was the snow chase scene. Great story btw im enjoying it. I admit it could use some more something. But im not a writer so who am i to judge.
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September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I like how you bring in other shows and movies and yet still keep it basically all naruto. I can't wait for the next chapter so that I can read even more.