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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the lemon, I hope you'll have more out soon.
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April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
now i like your story but your character kurohime you DO know hime means princess dont you
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this story thank you for sharing a new chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.
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January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i wonder if naruto's ever been to kumo...
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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter (chapter 4) please update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
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January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait to learn the rest of Naruto's past, not to mention his zanpakutou's powers and this new mission. I am dissapionted at the lack of sex portrayed in this chapter, but I guess it can't be in everyone, this story does have a plot after all. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon. Thanks.
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was totally hoping for NarutoxKurenai Lemon, update soon.
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A good story, but I have to disagree with you about Kekkai Genki...... they are no more 'shortcuts' than having better eyesight than another person, being faster because of genetics than another person, etc. is.
Using the Sharingan is NOT a 'shortcut to power' as Shino's father said.... it is just ANOTHER PATH to power that some people disagree with because they are jealous that they do not have the ability that allows them to use that path or tools that allow them to use that path.
Using the Sharingan is NOT a 'shortcut to power' as Shino's father said.... it is just ANOTHER PATH to power that some people disagree with because they are jealous that they do not have the ability that allows them to use that path or tools that allow them to use that path.
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December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!! Like really soon!!!!