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Chapter 3 was good, it did some nice set-up, but there is one promblem with it. THERE'S NO LEMON!!! Granted, it looks like you've started to set one up at the end there, but as an incredibly big pervert, its not enough! Other than that, it really was a good chapter. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can! And try to fit a nice long lemon in too.;)

nice stuff

Even before really getting into fanfiction, I could never hear Tsunade-chan's nickname with laughing a little. Also, her name is spelled Kurenai not Kurenei. I think Kurenei might be gibberish but Kurenai means crimson (probably a reference to her eyes). What about having Nai-chan teach Hinata Seijutsu using Naruto-san as a model? She can even have Anko-chan help... for missions where... Hinata has to... team up with another kunoichi to extract... information! Yeah that's it! It's in no way, shape, or form simply me wanting to see Hinata watch Naruto have a threesome with Anko-chan and Kurenai.

ok only thing i can say is good start, hurry up with the next part and more lemony goodness. as an idea for getting a little confidence into hinata (as well as some naruto into hinata hehehe) i think it'd be a good idea for kurenai to make hinata practise her seijutsu on naruto :)

The story is good u should continue it

Please update again soon. Thanks.

You know what I say.. if he could bring Gaara back from the dead with some bullshit jitsu, then there has to be a way for Hinata to come back. She HAS to come back. She's the only one in the cannon who deserves to end up with Naruto.

Also excellent chapter. Keep up the good work.

Nice looking fic. You seem to have a good plot. The lemon was pretty nice, though it could have been longer. Of course I always want lemons to be longer. *perverted giggles* Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can.

Wow damn good fic keep the good work up!

wow this is fantastic please update a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows