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for Only Training

by akatsume1593

schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...I can barely wait for more... Your Neji is unbelievably hot and still so in character. I've read the three stories you have posted, adore them all. I can't stand reading any stories like these where Neji falls so severely out of character. I Faraway Dawn of fanfiction.net and adultfanfiction.net salute you! ^_^ Your Neji made me drool... “I’m happy to oblige, but what exactly are you begging for?” That...was...so awesome. ^_^ That alone will have me coming back to read it again every day :)
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the insight you have into their relationship. The lemon was sweet, too.
person roxnroll
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice action there. He sounded experienced though. Great job. Can't wait to read more.
Rox
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big NejiTen fan, so this is a GREAT story! I love the plot and the smut is great. (I loved TenTen's line at the end of chapter 3 when she called Neji 'insufferable' XD) Lol, anyway, keep up the great work!
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story, i'm hooked. i hope you update soon. i love this pairing.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! There aren't enough NejiTen stories here, so I'm intrigued to see where you go with this.
person roxnroll
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!! I love this. Neji is one sexy dude. I can't wait to read whether or not she takes him up on his offer.
Rox
person roxnroll
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is off to a great start. I can't wait to read more.
Rox