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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome. utterly awesome. I don't know what more to say. I really don't get left speechless with awe from a killer story often. :D
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned this is FRIKKING hot?
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ONLY Gai-Sensei, lol. Only him! This was funny! I liked it and the lemon was good too! Keep up the good work!
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I could totally see this happening (actually, I'd like to see it happening).
Damn, that's hot. Great story and great writing.
Any chance Gai can give Tenten more inappropriate gifts?
Damn, that's hot. Great story and great writing.
Any chance Gai can give Tenten more inappropriate gifts?
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoah, very imaginitive and very, very steamy. I could actually picture it. the only problem I have is sthat you stopped before the real lemon scene. You cut it off in the middle. hello? Sacrilege. Add another chapter please!!
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really HOT!! Keep these coming.
Rox
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