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for Espial~the act of spying

by ElfenDream

schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was definitely, by far themost erotic, intense, smexy, oneshot EVER!! I've never been so utterly aroused by reading here on aff before. You had my heart racing, brow sweating, all my h...ry parts ITCHY!! Sorry...tmi.>.< I really enjoyed that and thank you for creating this world of Sai's with such awesome detail. I loved how you had him explaining everything he thought in his head and things he'd done as well as things he imagined being done or doing. It was definitely a rush.X3
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is insanely hot.
person Forgot her name after reaading that!
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was FABULOUS!! omfg, I've /never/ read something that is so fucking awesome, I felt myself pulled right into the story and I couldn't look away from the screen no matter what.

DAMN LADY THIS STORY WAS ALMOST TOO MUCH!

I /love/ Sai, how obsessive he is in here yet it doesn't seem too creepy because..well its /Sai/ and everyone knows he doesn't really know better. It was kinda cute in fact.

DID NOT expect this couple though, hahah, and I've NEVER seen it work before but...it works so well with the plot of the story and I love how he wasn't even that creeped out when Sai almost completely confessed to 'stalking' him.

*squeals like an overly satisified fangirl* HELL YEAH NO ONE WOULD TURN SAI'S FINEASS AWAY!

Thank you SOO much for such a wonderful oneshot, I think I'm gonna go read it again X3
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sai and Itachi... never saw that one coming... until they themselves nearly were. :P

Brillant, slighty creepy, and very arousing. I like it.