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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved this!
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March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What is this? Chap.1
WOW!! This is EROTIC!!HOT!!STEAMY!!! I just LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT!!! SQUEEL!!! OH MY GOSH!
I just can't say enough!! I love how its written and how everything progressed and all the little details that make me grin like an idiot with how perfectly WICKED this is!! Ya know when you make people grin like idiots it means we can't leave the house or people will freak out at what were grinning about to ourselves! :) hehehe Ok my cheeks HURT....dang it....I still have chap 2 and 3 to go.....I just might die of too much enjoyment!!!
WOW!! This is EROTIC!!HOT!!STEAMY!!! I just LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT!!! SQUEEL!!! OH MY GOSH!
I just can't say enough!! I love how its written and how everything progressed and all the little details that make me grin like an idiot with how perfectly WICKED this is!! Ya know when you make people grin like idiots it means we can't leave the house or people will freak out at what were grinning about to ourselves! :) hehehe Ok my cheeks HURT....dang it....I still have chap 2 and 3 to go.....I just might die of too much enjoyment!!!
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March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! I so want to read more of what happens to these two and the fun they have at getting to know each other. Law offices and hotel elevators leave so much room for fun and excitement at any moment for those two. I just can't wait to read about it!! :) hehe Especially with Sasuke a lawyer for criminal justice.....he will need all the help he can get to destress from a long day at work...I'm sure Naruto could help with that. :)
I really enjoyed all 3 chapters and didn't see a single thing to complain about...all 3 chaps are perfect in my opinion!! The descriptions and feelings ......I enjoyed how they were expressed. I so can't wait to see what happens next.....so many questions...heheh ...how long till they move in together......hehehhe
I really enjoyed all 3 chapters and didn't see a single thing to complain about...all 3 chaps are perfect in my opinion!! The descriptions and feelings ......I enjoyed how they were expressed. I so can't wait to see what happens next.....so many questions...heheh ...how long till they move in together......hehehhe
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would absolutely love a sequel to this!
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
would love a sequel. these 3 chapters have been awesome, especially with the writing quality. the conversation in ch 3 was played out very nicely.
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I love this! I'm really happy that it ended up meaning more to them than just the sex. I would love to read a sequel and see my Naruto welcoming his Sasuke back!! and the Reunion!sex too, of course!!! :DDD Great Oneshot!
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*GLOMPS*
thank you...from the bottom of my heart! That was a perfect ending. Not the kind that leaves you begging for more, and the writers is all mean because they don't feel like writing anymore about what happens, but it all comes together in the end. Sasuke's gonna come back, and Naruto's gonna be chill about it. It was just...perfect. Really perfect. If you write another, which i'd love to read, don't stop doing what your doing. its really wonderful!
thank you...from the bottom of my heart! That was a perfect ending. Not the kind that leaves you begging for more, and the writers is all mean because they don't feel like writing anymore about what happens, but it all comes together in the end. Sasuke's gonna come back, and Naruto's gonna be chill about it. It was just...perfect. Really perfect. If you write another, which i'd love to read, don't stop doing what your doing. its really wonderful!