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for Turn about is fair play

by VFSNAKE

person ps2boy
schedule April 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
good job like it and when will do the melfrcnt kitsin??
person S3vEn
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really funny / good :D
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i'd like to read about the others as well :)
person dan79
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you have to admit this is a non violent way of solving the fangirl problem
schedule December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sweet but too bad you didn't have more details of what he did to the other women.
person BigBalls
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you should continue this, branch it off to different girls, tell anko's, hana's, anyone's version of this. it would be pretty good.
person Leaf Ranger
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh heh. Glad I finally found this place. Nice man. I also looked over the other one, the one with the force. Nice. But the one I'm really waiting for is the last chapter of Establishing Dominance. Can you PM me when you update here?
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please write more chapters for this showcasing other women. And I'm not entirely sure if they had cameras. Though since it was showed before that they have security cameras and televisions, they most likely had photo cameras.
person Pinkney
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn... just damn. I loved it! I hope you write more of Naruto dominating girls stories.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Right, cameras.. Next you'll be saying they have cell phones in their time period. How about TV sets? Maybe a few cars?
Sigh, don't take this as a flame, I'm just cranky with boredom.