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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* woo was that HAWT! OMG please continue!!! Please i beg of you!! *gets down on hands and knees and begs*
Itachi: For a Beta she sure is persistent isnt she Naruto-kun?
Naruto: *moans* Ha-Hai Itachi-san that she is. Now get over here and play with me!
Itachi: For a Beta she sure is persistent isnt she Naruto-kun?
Naruto: *moans* Ha-Hai Itachi-san that she is. Now get over here and play with me!
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it, it was great, can you make one from sasukes pov of that night because i want to know why he was crying
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, now you have to please find a way to work Sasuke in there too.
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please don't say that this is a oneshot, please!!!!!!!! *whines and beg on her knees*
This is one of the best ItaNaru fics I've ever read, cause it's so incredibly original as well as realistic. Why didn't I think about it?! Naruto offering himself to Itachi in exchange for helping to get Sasuke back to Konoha. That genial!
And THE LEMON, OMG! I was practicly drooling to death. Holy shit!
And the last part, with Sasuke crying, that was so amazing! I felt so sorry for him, although he only has himself to blaim for being an asshole and treating Naruto badly!
Thank you so much for writing this! And if this just is a oneshot, than it won't matter since it's so awesome anyway. And I'll definetly put this on my profile over recommended fics. So thanks again!
Keep up with the good work, with this fic if it's a multichap, or if not, your good work as an author.
Take care. Hugs ^_^
This is one of the best ItaNaru fics I've ever read, cause it's so incredibly original as well as realistic. Why didn't I think about it?! Naruto offering himself to Itachi in exchange for helping to get Sasuke back to Konoha. That genial!
And THE LEMON, OMG! I was practicly drooling to death. Holy shit!
And the last part, with Sasuke crying, that was so amazing! I felt so sorry for him, although he only has himself to blaim for being an asshole and treating Naruto badly!
Thank you so much for writing this! And if this just is a oneshot, than it won't matter since it's so awesome anyway. And I'll definetly put this on my profile over recommended fics. So thanks again!
Keep up with the good work, with this fic if it's a multichap, or if not, your good work as an author.
Take care. Hugs ^_^
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
perfect title. the ending was really sad. i have a soft spot for sasuke, i don't know why. will this be continued?
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! Hehehehe. Poor Sasuke, watching from the window, betrayed and heartbroken.
Great oneshot> Keep up the good work. ^^
Great oneshot> Keep up the good work. ^^
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! I like your thinking; Itachi would be the best person for Naruto to approach. I would love to read any sequels - like if Konoha found out that Itachi is actually loyal to Konoha and only killed his clan under orders so Naruto and Itachi can come out with their relationship and stuff.
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice^^
Loved that added twist at the end.
Great job!
Are you going to expand this? (please say yes!)
Loved that added twist at the end.
Great job!
Are you going to expand this? (please say yes!)