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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My happy has just taken a sharp plunge. No, I love the reaction of Naruto's you wrote after he changed back per Sasuke's request. That was awesome. But why is this a oneshot?! I would love to know the reason you might cook up for Naruto to be working that job, or for how Sasuke turned up there. But all the same, awesome job with a Naruto fanfic. Very enjoyable. Very adorable...and smexy. Definitely sexy.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very well written, long and i didnt skim over one word
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really good!! The alley scene was HOT!!!!! At the end I just thought they were just going to part ways but I forgot about the slip of paper. That was WONDERFUL!!!!!
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn XD. This was really good. You write really well :D. I'm glad you decided to cross fandoms for a second XD. You're welcome back here anytime!! LOL, seriously that was Hot and you totally got it, the Naruto/Sasuke dynamic that I love *HUGS U*
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely great! And I loved the part where Sasuke tore off the arms of the chair because Naruto was smiling at other men!