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for Constructive Possession

by Prism0467

schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

I loved your Kindred series. It has inspired me to actually write something. Normally I just read stories, but I would like to actually write and submit one of my own now. I wanted to ask if it was okay and if I had your permission to write a story based off the Kindred universe. It would follow your premise, but take place 10 years after Constructive Possession. I would include a disclaimer and a recommendation to read your stories first. Let me know.

Desiderata
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story loved it!!!!
person 7mizu8
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hoooraaaayyyy!!! I was finally able to finish this! I haven't been able to read this tuff in a while and i'm so glad i was able to. i've missed this story and it was amazing =3 I loved all the craziness of their families and the over-all smexiness of it ;D But i wonder: Did the side fic about Kiba ever come into existence? I remember you saying something about it but i didnt se it in your profile so just wondering if you actually decided to or not.
Thank you for the wonderful trip!
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schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this thing from beginning to end. It was amazing and delicious. And I don't think I will ever forget Neji thinking the concept "I am the man". Or Shika's phrasing of "Gods on a ship!" Truly, I can't wait to read the rest of the series of sorts set in this AU space. Loved it. Honest to god, this is one of my favorite AUs about the ShikaNe pairing. It was fantabulous. Thank you for writing it. ^_^
person Samirnie
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it was a first male kiss for both of them. So sweet!!
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, what a sweet ending. I've seen so many wonderful stories spoiled by a shoddy or rushed ending but that was perfect. I've been around not since the beginning but pretty close so I'd just like to say how much I enjoyed both stories and how much I can't wait to read the others you will write in the future. I hope my overly emphatic, fan-girly reviews weren't obnoxious or overbearing for you, I tend to babble on a bit too long when I talk about something I really enjoy. Again, thank you, it was an amazing story.
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...Parting is such sweet sorrow. I'm really going to miss this story. Words can't express the depth of my angiush *cries*
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole thing, then went back and read Kindred (which I somehow missed before) and then read it again!!! I love your Neji/Shika! I'm so sorry this is over and I can't wait for the side fics. Please, keep it up.
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*wipes away a stray tear* Ahhh, I cannot believe it's finished but I can say that these past few weeks you've made my life a whole lot more worth living for ^_^ Thank you for this amazing piece of art! And I will look for the upcoming sequels. That's as sure as the amen in church! Thank you again and until your next work ^^
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had to leave a review here also. Such a bittersweet ending. Bitter - it's the end. Sweet - I need a dentist! Geez girl! What is going on that these men are either catatonic, comatosed, immobile, or a combination of all three after sex? What the heck am I doing wrong?

BRILLIANT!