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for Constructive Possession

by Prism0467

schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have never seen Kabuto as being particularly hot or anything, but after reading this he hottness factor increased by quite a bit. He is most definitely very uke-ish, and ready to bottom for Kiba anytime. I can't wait to see where this is going, but I also can't wait for the family dinner.

Great Job!

Peace-Love-Yaoi
person 7mizu8
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaay! Movie Date!
I'm sure he does look hot in green and jeans
that Is a pretty koo shirt too
^_^
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...Kabuto has got a little crush, how sweet ^_^ But 'JACK-POT'?! *rofl* That's priceless. Who the heck does scream jack-pot while cumming? *snigger* Now, I sooo cannot wait how this evening goes. If the first one ended with two broken teeth what will happen now? A broken limb? Or maybe something a lot more steamier? I'm waiting...
person sasunaru
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was good been waiting all week for it almost jumped up and down with happiness when I saw you posted the next chapter hahaha :)
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! I think it is so cute that Kiba feels bad about Kabuto and want to apologize for overreacting. i look forward to the next chapter. i do have a request though, could you PLEASE write a kabukiba side fiction?? *holds out large still warm homemade from scratch chocolate chip cookie* PALEEEEZE?!?
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I agree with Kiba, Naruto is a fox…a sexy, highly energetic fox that I don’t think Kiba could handle lol!! Oh my God…TWO teeth…damn Kiba…settle down now heel, no more punching Kabuto! Speaking of him....why does Kabuto live in that kind of place!? Update soon!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo...Kiba fantasizing about Naruto even when he is NOT asleep ^_^ I don't like Kabuto much but two broken teeth are really nasty. I hope Kiba finds the courage to apologize to him. Although...did he really punch him that hard? On the other hand, Kiba IS a strong boy, ne? ^^ Well, I'll be sitting in front of computer and waiting for the next part! And don't worry about updating. Take your time...although we readers will probably be totally deprived if you take longer than four days ^_^' But I, myself, would rather read a good chapter than a fast one!
person 7mizu8
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heh you dont have to worry about me going anywhere. I really like this story, especially the kiba side of the story
another awesome chapter
^_^
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel really bad for Kabuto, I can't help it. He is the one who is always picked on. I can't wait until he finds somebody. I am also eagerly awaiting the family dinner... I love awkwardness.

Great job (as usual),

Peace-Love-Yaoi
person Twiggies
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kabuto lost TWO teeth? Wow, Kiba must've punched him hard!
Hmmmh, so Kabuto lives in a poor neighbourhood? Interesting..
Oh and, I'm glad Kiba is trying to contact Kabuto. XD Heh, last time he couldn't even pick up the phone!

Mm, Kiba's dreaming of Naruto? Well that's fitting, they are both kind of animalistic! XD

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!