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Hahahahaha. Oh wow, what a lot of updates. To be honest, I'm much more used to slower updates, this is a pleasant surprise. And reading Hiashi is hilarious - especially the bit where he horrifies Neji about knowing Shikaku's size. You know, it surprises me a bit that Shikaku/Hiashi isn't more common a pairing. But actually, after reading how you wrote him, I'm sort of rooting for Hiashi/Tenten - someone to tame that Hyuuga lawyer, heh.

OMG I had a dream about this chapter! It's very nicely done. BTW, Kiba should hook up with Shino in your next fic. They're so awesome together. (Just a suggestion:P)

Damn, that was hot! You have me drooling so much in front of my computer, I think I have to buy a waterproof keyboard ^_^ I'll stay tuned a~lright. You didn't think I would leave this story even for a second, did you? I look it up every day to see if you have updated. There is no chance in hell that I wouldn't read it to the last chapter! And re-read at least...oh, I don't know a few dozen times?! And like I stated before I'll be waiting for any chapter and/or sequel!

So sexy! I love how you make their sex practical. Anal sex really does call for certain measurements to be taken. Especially with a man like Shikamaru. But what I like most is that you make it practical without making it seem clinical, you know? It gives a new angle to your stories that others don't take advantage of. Let me tell you that making it realistic didn't make it lose any of it's hottness, quite the contrary! Hot damn... That was fantastic.

You answered my question about Kiba and Kabuto, but what about Kiba and Hiashi. I can just see it now. The spitting image of his first male crush taking his virginity. I love Hiashi... Even if they don't end up together, I hope Hiashi will find someone too!

Peace-Love-Yaoi

lol Id love to talk. My aol is flamestrikeswiftly.

What are the few?!
awesome chapter
i'm so glad it's finally getting into Shika/Neji. don't get me wrong, i love it either way, but i've always liked Shika as the top.
Yaaay! Kiba!
I can't wait =3

*Snickers* He should have gotten the plug with a tail, Neji is an animal in bed after all!!! *Eyes widen at Shika’s choice of toys* ….you must be a brave, brave man to take 18 inches. But Neji didn’t seem to mind…Dear God…the images of Neji on the bed spread like that caused a major nose bleed...can you die from something blood loss like that lol!? *Sighs* Shikamaru is such a lucky, lucky man! Looking forward to more Neji and Shika action especially when Shikamaru jumps Neji’s ass…literally! Update soon!

wow i didn't think anyone could write a toy scene that was so hot. go you please update soon i love your work!!

There's the waited ShikaNeji lemon!
God it was so hot. Mmm, Neji, Shikamaru and a dildo. And a butt plug.
Heheh. XD Neji really has to be well prepared, 12 inches of Shikamaru's cock would rip him in half! o.o
Scary... But it was so hot... how Neji actually went to work with a butt plug in his ass.

I hope you keep writing more of this hotness. 8DD :drools already:
And more of Kiba and Kabuto is coming? Heh, can't wait to read about that eather. XD
(...That sounded weird.. More of Kiba and Kabuto is coming! XD Well, if Kabuto gets to look at Kiba's ass anymore longer, he will be coming, if you know what I mean.) Update soon again!

I have been following this story since you first posted it!!! I love all the stories before Kindred and Indisposed hehehe I am totally inlove with this story!!!! :) I hope that Kiba ends up with someone nice becuase I like KIBA!!!!!