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for Constructive Possession

by Prism0467

person 7mizu8
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh so Kabuto isn't who Kiba's gonna be with, huh? i wonder who its gonna be o_O
haha the first thing he says is that he's getting blood on his carpet. hilarious
thanks for the chapter! =3
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods! That was so bloody cute. Please let Kabuto and Kiba get together?
person Twiggies
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my oh my. Kiba got his first male kiss and Kabuto got his piece of Kiba. And propably a broken tooth on top of it. XD
Haha, there Kiba's just thinking if Kabuto found him sexually appealing, when in truth Kabuto just wants to grab his hot ass. I wonder though: who IS going to get that ass? XD

Update soon again!
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes Kiba, Kabuto is a decent guy and you should have taken him to bed to see how good he was in that respect *wiggles eyebrows* lol, Kabuto would have agreed!! Hmm, now I’m wondering even harder now who you will pair Kiba up with (since it’s not Kabuto)…decisions, decisions! Kiba packs one hell of a punch, just reading about it made my face hurt. I felt sorry for Kabuto but I mean Kiba is still trying to get more comfortable with himself and then Kabuto goes and does something like that…and Kiba’s reaction was well a Kiba reaction. I’m pretty sure Kabuto lost a few brain cells from that punch though. Hehe, love Kabuto’s little side comments, especially the ones bout grabbing Kiba’s ass, that man has a very nice ass ^_^. Lol, I hope that little moment won’t make things to awkward for Kiba and Kabuto, update soon!

schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please make them a couple...kiba /naruto is so overdone...and bringing in someone else could be troublesome... I was thinking....you mentioned about how anyone who wore a mask had to at least be bi (in reference to kakashi) If you decide not to do kabuto/kiba...then could you do kakashi/kiba? It would be groundbreaking as well...and think of the smexiness involved..besides, Kakashi (while not being uber old, cause hes loads younger than hiashi..i think in this he seems like 35ish.) still seems like the "older guy" type Kiba would need. It seems like a younger guy just wouldnt work for Kiba..I doubt they could handle his issues. But an older guy could be his anchor...Does this make any sense? I hope so.
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww... they're not gonna be a couple? I was wrong... oh well.

I hope to see Kiba finding somebody soon. Hiashi??? No... maybe... If anybody can break Kiba out of his prude ways it's Hiashi, and he does look an awful lot like Neji...

Okay, I am going to stop speculating before I drive myself mad.

Peace-Love-Yaoi
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep, good thing he can take a punch...but he had asked for it if you asked me ^_^ And God bless you that you don't plan on putting these two together *huggles prism*. So, what's going to happen to Kiba now, after he received his first kiss from a man? I cannot wait to find out! I'm soo~oo staying tuned, dattebayo! (sorry I couldn't help myself ;P )
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! My Kiba’s back! Lol he kept hesitating and when Kabuto showed up I loved how he acted. *Wiggles eyebrows* maybe Kiba unconsciously wants Kabuto, hence the reason why he backed that ass up 'accidently' into Kabuto! Screw the munchies they can munch on each other lol! And I don’t blame Kabuto who could not be attracted to Kiba!
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Kiba! What did I say? I knew Kabuto was gonna be Kiba's man! You know Kabuto never gets any love, and I appreciate you using him in your story. You have actually used alot on characters that most ppl don't, and I think that is what sets your story apart from other fics. Awesome job!

Can't wait for more.

Peace-Love-Yaoi
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, so sweet. Kiba all skittish XD But I'm still secretly hoping you will NOT put him up with Kabuto. My favorite vote would be Naruto but I'll love whatever you've planned anyway. Aw man, no old liason between Hiashi and Shikaku ...damn, that would have been funny ... and kind of hot ;P I'm ready and waiting in front of computer for the next part ^_^