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You know you got me addicted, right? This story has it all - sex, love, confusion, fun, cliffhangers more evil than Orochimaru himself...that last one was damn cruel, you know. Woohoo, seems like Neji is ready to submit to Shikamaru. And who wouldn't ^_^ And do I detect a strong hint at future Kiba x Naruto? I do hope so ^^ I also cannot wait to read the long awaited family dinner scene. I think it will be hilarious! All those eccentric *cough - weird - cough* people in one place. Mainly Hiashi of course ^_^ I love how you portrayed him. He made me laugh my ass off with his antics towards Shikamaru and Neji. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part...

YEESSS! Dear god yess! The dream!!! Even though it was only a dream….damn I wish I could have been Kiba! There was Neji AND Naurto! Nope, there would have been no resisting anything! Who would not want to be molested by Konoha’s finest!

Lol for some reason there is always one little sentence that you have either Shikamaru or Neji say that evoke some strange response frp, me like when Shikamaru said 'I think someone wants our attention' I was like yeah me! I want a little of your attention and Neji’s….I’ll give you a dollar! And when Neji bent over to pick up his pants *swoons* Shikamaru should have jumped his ass (literally) right then and there!!!

Lol did they expect the women to be disgusted? I’d be like hey, I’ll do whatever you want for a front seat to that show *wiggles eyebrows* and I’d even bring my own popcorn! I mean who wouldn’t want to watch some Neji and Shika action, you’re just not human if you don’t lol. Neji’s little wtf moment was amusing. That’s right damn it Neji submit and be banged into a concussion, I promise it will be good for you!!! Yay ^_^ I am adored! Feel free to drop me a line nitenite617@aol.com I have some more ideas for Kiba side stories and other naked filled bishie goodness!

You are so fantastically evil!!! You left me hanging, but it's okay... I have a feeling that there is some very hot mansex about to happen aboard that yacht. Can't wait for more, I am a junkie and this story is my drug.

Cliffhangers are.

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Oh yes, Kiba's definitely doing better. XD
That dream of his was hot! 8D
Good that Kiba's coming to his senses now.

Hahaha! xD
Oh my God. Those women were hilarious. Well, actually the situation were.Mm and hot too!
The guys weekend surely wasn't boring.
Heheh, Can't wait to read the next chapter!
This chapter ended so hotly. 8D

Oh and: I'm not sure if I reviewed to the previous chapter, but it was good. It was great to know something about Neji's past too.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

*Squeals* I will hold you Kiba! Come here…let me ‘comfort’ you *perverted grin*! I would be honored to brainstorm with you, who could turn down naked lemony Kibaness!!!! Lol, for some reason when it mentioned the yacht being out in open water…a really creepy image of Neji popped up and he whispered ‘now no one can hear you scream’………but when it comes down to it Neji doesn’t mind Shikamaru screaming anyway.

Damn it! Ppl are going to have to tell me in advance when auctioning off things like Neji and all that is his yummyness! I would have just ‘borrowed’ Neji from the lady with no intention of returning his fine ass…sry Shikamaru! But I love the play of emotions b/w these two, and I think it would be interesting to see how Shika and Neji would react if Kiba were to explain his ‘interest’ in them.

HA! The whole review went through!

Holy god. I will admit now that I stopped and stared when the summary promised AsuTen and HiaTen. That is the only reason I'm reading this - not that I don't think your ShikaNeji is awesome, but I'm just so interested in the sheer originality of the - triangle? Bilateral agreement? going on between the three very (in my opinion) underused characters. I love the way you write the dynamics between Hiashi and Neji, too. Between Tenten and Asuma. WILL this become a sort of triangle? I love especially reading Hiashi. And - I just...wow, am so looking forward to more of this.

So sweet.
I really love this pairing, this story, and your writing. I really want Kiba to end up with someone awesome!
Thanks for the amazing story so far! Keep up the great work!
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That was easily the best chapter you have written for this story so far. Shika and Neji are so romantic, in this whole other universe than the rest of us. Neji's past is so much darker than I thought... so sad. It makes me like Hiashi even more. Kiba however, needs somebody to "Sex Him Up" so he will finally realize that being gay isn't this whole unnatural, atrocity. Freaking amazing... as usual.

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*Drools at image of Kiba cleaning room naked* Dear God! It’s ok Kiba, I’ll be your medicine I’ll help you get better! Hell I’ll even help you out in the shower for free *wiggles eyebrow* But, you know, he could have gone to the store naked, he just might have been snatched off the street and disappeared, by the way if that were to ever happen I had nothing to do with it >