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by Prism0467

person Anon
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your stories happen to be my first time reading Shikamaru/Neji and god damn am I hooked now (reading Kindered was freaking amazing, you're a blessed writer)! Love the way you bring these two together and how you express their characters! I never realized that these two could be so freaking yummy and feisty together! And the lemons my god *swoons* I love how Neji is dominant *squeals* luckily freaking Nara...hmm...I wonder if he'd be willing to share if I got him drunk enough XD. By the way is Shikamaru ever going to give Neji some love *wiggles eyebrows* it always seems that Neji is giving Nara all the loving during their love making, not that it's a bad thing but eventually, hopefully Shikamaru will bang Neji into a concussion! Lol I'm interseted to see how the family dinner is gonig to go. Once again love your stories and hope you update soon!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to add something!

KIBA!!!! Something’s wrong with the sexy, arrogant, man! He seems to be having some...issues...with some things! I think he needs to get banged into a concussion to, maybe that will help him figure things out? Don’t leave him like this, throw the man a bone (hehe) XD.
person Twiggies
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, so that Oslo finally realized to leave. xD
Good for them, too bad for Oslo. xD

Oh wow. Love confession! Awwh.
A little was revealed from Neji's past.
Wow... That girl drowned herself? I suppose it's not so easy to say those words back to Shika.
But he surely showed him that he loves him. Veeery much. xD
Hot as ever.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love the way you have these two interacting.
I love the way you get into Shika's mind.
I love everything about your writing.

Can't wait for more.
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN that was hot!! I love this story. It is what I read to decompress after a long week at college. So thank you for sharing it with everyone. please update soon?!
person Twiggies
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that Oslo actually dared to go and talk to Neji?
Well, I guess it is understandable, he thought with his dick after all. XDD
But he really didn't get, not even when pointed at with a gun.
Ahh, Shika and Neji are such hot men. 8D Police men.. kinda.

Ooh, someone actually knows where Hiashi is.
I wonder from whom that package was from.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go~d, this was so hot! And, did Shika black out? I'm sure I would have ^_^ You are awesome, I love this story and I cannot wait to read more. More sexyness, more smexing, more fun more, more, more...Am I addicted?
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just got one word for that chapter: HOT!

I can't wait to see the family dinner, and eew, having to hear about your parent's sex life.
*sigh* my dad used to do that to me though. I can kind of understand.

Can't wait for the next update.
person Twiggies
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hott!
Neji is such a teaser. xD It was super hot though!
Their weekend had a great start indeed. xD And it just started! :drool:

Ah, that family dinner? I wonder what comes of it.
But I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love OOc Hiashi! He's so funny ^_^ I can't wait to see what antics he's sure to be up to at the family dinner.