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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh yes! Was that good you ask?!
So awesome! 8DD
Well, I'm sure a lot of people have been waiting for this and... It was SO WORTH IT!!
Ahhh, So intense. :D
Neji seemed to be such a tight fit. I wonder if he's going to be sore.. XD
Aww, and so emotional and, just so hot.
At that one point, I knew Neji was going to cry! Aww, so sweet. ;D
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
So awesome! 8DD
Well, I'm sure a lot of people have been waiting for this and... It was SO WORTH IT!!
Ahhh, So intense. :D
Neji seemed to be such a tight fit. I wonder if he's going to be sore.. XD
Aww, and so emotional and, just so hot.
At that one point, I knew Neji was going to cry! Aww, so sweet. ;D
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO. I had to read this and then come back and review because I had to get my thoughts together. I didn't just want this to be another "Whoohoo" type review. So here it goes...
Usually in stories like this where the author takes his or her time getting to the actual "sex" where the audience is built up to the characters actually getting there, I have found that I am often disappointed or left with a feeling of "what now". It's not necessarily that the scene was ill written, but more or less just like in a relationship where often we are left with "that's it" after the "big event". I do not think that I am the only one who feels this way and I hope you understand what I am saying here...
With that being said, I can honestly say that I was not left with that feeling here in your work. As sensual as the scene was, it just wasn't about that. And it sure as heck wasn't just about the emotion. I believe it was a combination of both. This chapter was "charged" with soooo much that I can barely articulate it. It went way beyond the usual sex scene and I guess it is because of the "build" up that you so masterfully created. Just like Neji realized, it was never about who is on "top" but rather the love and TRUST that goes into a relationship. Just from the little snippet of Neji's past that you gave us, it was easy to understand why he was crying in the middle of it all. With all this being said, I hope you understand that I am saying that this scene was both artisticaly and tastefully done. It truly was amazing on so many levels.
NOW.... I didn't get that last "position" so to speak. But that didn't take away from the beautiful dynamic that you have created through these two characters. BRAVO!
Usually in stories like this where the author takes his or her time getting to the actual "sex" where the audience is built up to the characters actually getting there, I have found that I am often disappointed or left with a feeling of "what now". It's not necessarily that the scene was ill written, but more or less just like in a relationship where often we are left with "that's it" after the "big event". I do not think that I am the only one who feels this way and I hope you understand what I am saying here...
With that being said, I can honestly say that I was not left with that feeling here in your work. As sensual as the scene was, it just wasn't about that. And it sure as heck wasn't just about the emotion. I believe it was a combination of both. This chapter was "charged" with soooo much that I can barely articulate it. It went way beyond the usual sex scene and I guess it is because of the "build" up that you so masterfully created. Just like Neji realized, it was never about who is on "top" but rather the love and TRUST that goes into a relationship. Just from the little snippet of Neji's past that you gave us, it was easy to understand why he was crying in the middle of it all. With all this being said, I hope you understand that I am saying that this scene was both artisticaly and tastefully done. It truly was amazing on so many levels.
NOW.... I didn't get that last "position" so to speak. But that didn't take away from the beautiful dynamic that you have created through these two characters. BRAVO!
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes yessss *slurred speech* It was VERY good for me!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!!!! Oh my god! It was so worth it. It was so romantic and sweet, and it made me cry when I read it. oh it was so worth the wait!! Bravo!! And Bravo till infinity!! It was perfect, amazing, timeless and everything you wanted it to be. You truely are the best!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING I ALMOST CRIED!!!!!! WOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh…my…god…*nosebleed* that was fucking hot! Lol damn very, very, very, nicely done! Dying like that hell I wouldn’t mind! Go Shikamaru *steals Neji’s line* YOU ARE THE MAN!
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol 'pornographic memory'! I have that too ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter *squirms in seat* It's going to be sexily great. Shika topping *tingles in anticipation*
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, I'm seriously a wiki-addict. I am SUPER psyched for shikamaru to top. I can't decide weather I want him to be a confident top or a nervous one. I know you'll make the right choice though, so I'm not worried in the slightest ^^ Cannot wait for the new place they live to be "broken in" and I bet it's super luxurious with a spectacular view too. You're so good at writing up the environments I kinda want to live in Neji's current apartment (only with colour). Ok, I'm starting to babble. Forgive me, it's late and I have class in the morning. POINT IS, I love the story, keep it comin' :3
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nosebleed! I can't even put the hotness of this chapter into words...
Peace-Love-Yaoi needs a cold shower...
Peace-Love-Yaoi needs a cold shower...
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
had the same reaction except mine went more like this: "Nahnanahnabooboo, Neji's gonna get it! Nahnanahnabooboo. So looking forward to him "getting it"!