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for Constructive Possession

by Prism0467

person Anon
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I don't think Shika and Neji are going to be able to walk into their kitchen without images of Shikamaru's parents doing 'that' in there lol. *Cheers for Yoshino* That's right encourage Shikaku to jump Hiashi...it will be good for him. I thought with all that bickering Shikamaru would just throw Neji on the bed and top Neji just to shut his dad up lol. But I do agree with Shikaku and Hiashi, Neji needs to bottom at least once for Shikamaru *drools at images*

"Shikaku scowled at Neji. “Talk to me about it after you take my son’s foot-long in the ass, boy.”

LOL! Love that. An...amusing chapter update soon!
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PRICELESS!
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so hilarious. "Shikamaru's got something real big he can use." HAHAHA! My abs are hurting still from laughing so hard. There are so many parts in this chapter that I thought were funny. Yay! Neji and Shika are gonna have a great time releasing all that sexual tension! I am surprised Hiashi wasn't in the kitchen with the Nara's... not yet anyway.

Most amazing story ever! The fan art is awesome too.

Peace-Love-Yaoi
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol bad Neji fondling Shikamaru like that....well I take it back it wasn't bad it was hot! I can only imagine if Shika suddenly shot out of his seat and jumped Neji....Hiashi would probably join in the fun and jump Shikaku. *Snickers* Tenten is messing with Yoshino's yaoi fantasy lol messing with a yaoi girl's fantasy could get a person killed. Wow Tenten's lovely display of...energeticness got everyone all worked up lol....Shika's parents....in the KITCEHN lol....well....lol Neji gonna's have to get that cleaned up real good in there *cough* if they're venting their pent up frustration lol! Update soon and Merry Christmas!
person Gaia77
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“That one can deep-throat a can of Olde English 800¹, I guarantee it.”

OMFG I can't stop laughing!
You are THE best, woman, THE best...lmfao
person sasunaru
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FREAKING GREAT!!!!! OMG I WANTED TO DIE WHEN HE SHOWED HER THE PHOTOS AND DANG A VIDEO AS WELL HE IS GOOD HAHAHAHAHAHA
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh mi gosh ten ten that was so mean of hashi!! i lievs for the next chapter!!!
person 7mizu8
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snicker snicker* Mr. Happy Fun Ball... he he
ahhh awesome stuffs once again. i was laughing the whole time, of course
amazing fanart. the last one was also my favorite =D
i cant wait to see what neji and shika have in store for each other laaaterrr =o *snicker*
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I try to leave detailed reviews but all I have to say about this chapter is awesome. Very awesome. Keep it coming because I love every second of it.
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
1. Shikamaru's parents - yes, certifiable!
2. Neji confessing - YESSSSSSSSSSSSS!
3. Pic of Shikaku and Haishi - HAD A CONIPTION! (if that's how u spell it!)
4. Next chapter - waiting ever so patiently!
5. Overall - LUV THIS FIC!